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I usually write rock songs but...

Postby ra1n » Aug 10th, '09, 09:58

I recently wrote this just to play around with words and Assonance (especially at the end), probably not structured correctly, but tell me what ya think...

(First time posting in creative writing btw)


God/Devil Complex

I'm not dying till the great prophecy is fulfilled
I'm not lying, these words, can get you kidnapped and killed
I dwell in the dreamworld of superior lyricism and skill
this was never my intention but the manifestation of God's will
this was thought of before creation of mankind and the seven seals --
before the rain fell and cain made abel's blood spill

was born with god and the devil fighting inside of me
sacred scrolls of antiquity--
warned the world about me constantly
I am ground zero for the mentally ill
the supreme being, the anomaly,--
living underground where darkness is instilled
the inventor of the mark of the beast,
the follower of the philosophies of the east
the mastermind of the terminal disease
earth is the puppet and words are my strings
holding the world together
before all life is deceased

I wait for the ressurection of the dead
the day the sun blisters red
the day I find out that I was never human,
I was a demon trapped in the flesh

tried to fight against the spirit of the antichrist
but was enticed by sight of the king of lies
finally opened my eyes to the Zeitgeist
I heard angels silently cry/ when
I devised a scientific plan/ for the
demise of the alliance of man
denied the blood of the lamb
and the light did not guide me--
into the promise land
I derived from another life in disguise
to create a device for the decline of time,
decide to define me and logic is defied!
I am he who made the brightest stars in the sky align
decoded ancient alien signs
along with encrypted egyptian designs alike
provided miracles and knowledge worldwide
synthesized water and fire
divided truth from liars
described life as it collided with man's first suicide
and smiled when god created my talent and pride


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Re: I usually write rock songs but...

Postby BILI » Aug 10th, '09, 10:48

Its pretty good dude.Keap it up
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Re: I usually write rock songs but...

Postby ra1n » Aug 10th, '09, 11:07

BILI wrote:Its pretty good dude.Keap it up
check something main viewtopic.php?f=24&t=65388


thx.

i'll check yours out now....
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