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Short Sermon

Postby mcZu » Aug 9th, '09, 17:56

When ever their ‘shit-come’ I laugh at their rhyme-scheme
‘cause their ‘friends’ can’t talk, so they stuck on a ‘sign-field’
They amount to nothing like the economy of Nigeria
Their amount of lyricism is lower then the winters in Siberia
So I shiver at their lyrics, unsophisticated musical limericks.
Their words are the same in each song like ideal communism
They communicate like primitive apes with no sense of lyricism-
They change their standards each time like Raven Darkholme
Comparing them to me, is like comparing a dog to Sherlock Holmes
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Re: Short Sermon

Postby mcZu » Aug 9th, '09, 18:44

Coleon wrote:for what it was it was good :y: I don't know Darklhome though lol, but I liked the part about communism, stupid bastards, good short drop :y:

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Thanks, and Raven Darkholme is X-Man's Mystique :y:
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Re: Short Sermon

Postby gutawafang » Aug 9th, '09, 18:45

Liked the last two lines. I kinda like nameplay nowadays. :p Your nameplay is good. :y:
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Re: Short Sermon

Postby BILI » Aug 9th, '09, 18:46

wow pretty cool :y: :y:
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Re: Short Sermon

Postby mcZu » Aug 10th, '09, 12:37

Thanks Guta and BILI :b:
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