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Re: Why I'm Here

Postby classthe_king » Aug 8th, '09, 02:15

wow, dope :worship:
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Re: Why I'm Here

Postby Noeezy » Aug 8th, '09, 10:17

nice shit man, liked the multies :y:
the chorus flowed pretty good too
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Re: Why I'm Here

Postby gutawafang » Aug 8th, '09, 18:05

You practice a lot man! That was pretty good man. Liked the flow. :y:
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Re: Why I'm Here

Postby mcZu » Aug 9th, '09, 18:46

Good drop, not too complex, but solid. I enjoyed it, keep it up Cole :b:
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Re: Why I'm Here

Postby Solace » Aug 11th, '09, 19:46

Yeah good job man, i liked the chorus and the verse was pretty dope.
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Re: Why I'm Here

Postby Solace » Aug 11th, '09, 19:49

Yeah I think I should start feeding more so yea
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