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Venomous

Postby Requiem » Aug 11th, '09, 07:11

first drop in a while so... :sweating:

i spit venom, give u more stitches than fixed denom,
Twisted dentist, i'm itchin to give ur teeth a whole new vision.
Life prison sentence, sickest menace since Denace released a tempest,
Chauvenist machinist, choke Jahova's witness with a kleenex.
Take ur damn V-Neck, twist it back like Ryan Seacrest,
Leak Victoria's secret, the ho's a hermaphradite,
She's like Lady Gaga, just another Dick van Dyke.
On the site, i wreak havoc, just to pick a fight, in the night.
Go out like John McCain, lose the battle in my spite.
Imitate the Game, fake my fame, high as a kite.
Defacate on Lil Wayne, oh i'm insane, right?
You aint seen shit yet, let me open my potty mouth,
and i aint goin down till i knock everybody out.
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Re: Venomous

Postby gutawafang » Aug 11th, '09, 08:09

Lots of nameplay obviously.

NICE: Defacate on Lil Wayne, oh i'm insane, right?

Kinda for fun to me: Take ur damn V-Neck, twist it back like Ryan Seacrest

The flow's quite okay to me. I mean it's a short verse, I don't expect much on flow. I'll say it again, nameplay's good. LOL. And good ending: and i aint goin down till i knock everybody out.

Good to see you drop again homie. :y: :y: :y:

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Re: Venomous

Postby BILI » Aug 11th, '09, 15:40

It was pretty good....rhyming was alright,nameplay was dope too,flowed really good...dope drop :y:
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Re: Venomous

Postby Requiem » Aug 11th, '09, 18:21

thx guys :8)

feeding those things now
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Re: Venomous

Postby Solace » Aug 11th, '09, 18:50

That was dope haha, fell off a lot in my opinion half way through, this part of it was the best

i spit venom, give u more stitches than fixed denom,
Twisted dentist, i'm itchin to give ur teeth a whole new vision.
Life prison sentence, sickest menace since Denace released a tempest,
Chauvenist machinist, choke Jahova's witness with a kleenex.
Take ur damn V-Neck, twist it back like Ryan Seacrest,
Leak Victoria's secret, the ho's a hermaphradite,

Loved the flow of it, keep dropping more here (i know i should too lol) and keep that stuff up.

PS. Was that a le tunisien subliminal?
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Re: Venomous

Postby mcZu » Aug 11th, '09, 18:52

Solace wrote:That was dope haha, fell off a lot in my opinion half way through, this part of it was the best

i spit venom, give u more stitches than fixed denom,
Twisted dentist, i'm itchin to give ur teeth a whole new vision.
Life prison sentence, sickest menace since Denace released a tempest,
Chauvenist machinist, choke Jahova's witness with a kleenex.
Take ur damn V-Neck, twist it back like Ryan Seacrest,
Leak Victoria's secret, the ho's a hermaphradite,

Loved the flow of it, keep dropping more here (i know i should too lol) and keep that stuff up.

PS. Was that a le tunisien subliminal?


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Re: Venomous

Postby Requiem » Aug 11th, '09, 20:27

no it's not a subliminal. lmao, thx for the feed :happy:
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Re: Venomous

Postby classthe_king » Aug 11th, '09, 21:06

I thought this was dope as hell. Like someone else said lots of nameplay. Good rhyming, and very entertaining.
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