Common Attack

[gutawafang]

It’s hilarious when people get envious over the small things
Telling me to shut the fuck up and listen what ya’ll think
Trying to trick me, make me trip, fall and sink-
In the waters, forcing me to hate-to-core things
He wouldn’t drown though, especially with his clown-flow
His fucking crown glows like how a town throws-
A party, get drunk one night and get laid with a 16
A girl part Asian, part Caucasian, she’s a mixed teen
Couldn’t regret but could remorse it , ain’t it the same?
Didn’t cause it, didn’t force it, she wants in in the game
Caused his depression, she dumped him after that night
Said she didn’t like it cumming in her backside
I’m going out of story again, writer’s block’s the issue
I feel so hungry for fame but the glock’s just missed you
Out of ink to write my next page of this chapter
I should become a part-time rubbish collector
Can’t be a conuctor, teacher, nor rapper
This kind of shit makes me think a lot madder
So madder lyrics come around, like how the horses climb the mountain
Fighting through it all day long, going higher like they’ll pound us
Create a stairway to heaven Led by words in my head
Harder than diamond bricks, able to sustain any weight

[classthe_king]

I thought it started off very well but then sort of dropped off at the end. Rhyming was good and structure was alright.

[gutawafang]

I thought it started off very well but then sort of dropped off at the end. Rhyming was good and structure was alright.

Thanks a lot for checking it out brother.

[classthe_king]

Haha thanks, mind checkin out my piece

[BILI]

I thought it started off very well but then sort of dropped off at the end. Rhyming was good and structure was alright.

I was thinking the same thing...lol....I started good but fell at the end

[gutawafang]

Thanks 2pac! I mean, Bili! I'll improve in my next drop. I did it in five minutes... So...

[BILI]

Thanks 2pac! I mean, Bili! I'll improve in my next drop. I did it in five minutes... So...

lmfao.....check some of my new stuff

[gutawafang]

dope. saw this on your facebook

HAHAHA! Yeah man. I like to see the BIG differences between the reactions of my local people and foreigners. Kinda really BIG difference. Well, thanks a lot for checking it out Scott!