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My Bloc

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My Bloc

Postby BILI » Aug 11th, '09, 22:52

Something really simple :p

My eyes are filled with water,filled with tears
My bloc is in a warfare,and all we feal is fear
People are lying chopped up on da street
Or blown 100 feet,-away,we used to be elite
But no more its time for us to pull this together
So that we can get out of this even grater
I would just love to see everything calm and peaceful
I dont know if they`ll ever realize that this aint cool
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Re: My Bloc

Postby BILI » Aug 12th, '09, 02:04

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Re: My Bloc

Postby gutawafang » Aug 12th, '09, 04:30

Not that good cuz it didn't flow that good to me. I like the fact that you practice everyday so keep that up homie. This isn't your best cuz I know you can do MUCH better man. :y:
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Re: My Bloc

Postby BILI » Aug 12th, '09, 15:11

gutawafang wrote:Not that good cuz it didn't flow that good to me. I like the fact that you practice everyday so keep that up homie. This isn't your best cuz I know you can do MUCH better man. :y:

Yeah i know this was a simple one...thx for the feed :flower:
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