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President

Postby BILI » Aug 12th, '09, 00:34

Sometimes its weird,it feels like I`m alone in the world
I`m not askin much I just want you all to listen to my word
You all gotta stay,If you don`t,then we`re all gonna pay
People you just need to hear what is it that I wanna say
I bet there`s not one amongst you that wants to becama a prey
But thats excatly what we`re becoming if we dont change our leader
Or we`ll be destoyed like Eminem alomst got whith the line about the Beever
You see people I`m beliver,and I hope that you all are believing
Me,when I say that we can take them down,If you dont then I`ll be leaving
Right now,but if we persist we can resist them and fight for our own existence
But in this task I need assistance,we should go eazy and keep the distance
Get into their headquarters,get supporters,steel the documents and escape in tranporter
Well thats the plan,so whos with me,and whos with them,we`ll go harder then Eminem
"Mosh" will look like a joke to this,I really want to piss,them all,especially the president
If we fail in a sniper assasination I think that I`ll send him a big present then
With a message in it thats says boom,and I`ll say goodbye for good.

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President, the man steppin with dead presidence
irrelavent, the people ya ignore, fear instead of it
government, the hell with it, action instead of dissin
written convincin, plottin assasination on television


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Re: President

Postby heva » Aug 12th, '09, 00:57

oh shit..you really don't like our govnerment lol..me neather..ain't bad homie
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Re: President

Postby BILI » Aug 12th, '09, 01:01

hewwa wrote:oh shit..you really don't like our govnerment lol..me neather..ain't bad homie

Nope I hate all of them...I was lmafo when Sanader left
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Re: President

Postby heva » Aug 12th, '09, 01:04

me too..they're all bitches..specially current premier :laughing:
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Re: President

Postby BILI » Aug 12th, '09, 01:07

hewwa wrote:me too..they're all bitches..specially current premier :laughing:

female premier :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing:
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Re: President

Postby BILI » Aug 12th, '09, 02:05

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Re: President

Postby gutawafang » Aug 12th, '09, 04:33

It's pretty good cuz it's DIRECT. I could see it expressed well enough to prove you hate the president. Use less "Eminem" unless it's REALLY good. I see those lines with "Eminem" were redundant to me man.

This piece flows not that good cuz it's just rhyming for the skae of it to me. But still, good to see your drops man. :y:
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Re: President

Postby BILI » Aug 12th, '09, 15:14

^^thx
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Re: President

Postby SajN » Aug 12th, '09, 15:17

Very nice, flow was here and there.
Simple rhymes, but you'll get better with them when you practise more :y:

But I think the emine, beaver line should be cutted out, I dont think it was necessary in a rap like this.

But you're doing good, keep it up :y:
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