Revolving Thoughts

[mcZu]

Feedback appreciated.

Revolving Thoughts
Procedures proceed to ensure that that dude
Knows how to acknowledge knowledge, due
Being knowledgeable in latitude terms too
On the longitude I use my attitude in terms to
Add it up ‘till it becomes rude
So Zu being arrogant is just a mirror shard sharpened due
The coordinates cooperating when I mirror lost too
Navigation checked; figures march through
Navigate through like chess do, sneakers feel like frost too
Agitate, convulse, shake, con pulse and then sue
The issues issuing certain restraint issues
Shit’s cruel, and due humanity being that rude
So being a human being just adds to being that dude
Far from being cool, shipped away too
I’m on deck though I can’t ship through
Can’t dock my ship –lost my grip too
I’m infamous, ‘cause I cause people to shock too
This logic is paralyzed though dressed in a parabolic suit
....Fueled for thoughts

Optics suggest to condensate mo’ often
I tell ‘em my emotions are cons, gotta sedate them mo’ often
People segregate too often
They rather set a degrade rate than greet each other
It’s greed that’s bothering sisters and brothers
We’re all humans, yet I insist to differ from the others
Life’s rigor mortis –pen game make’s it softer
So from now on I’m gonna grab the pen mo’ often
Insert the pin and then throw away the grenade to bother
The people who misuse the ink to alter
The way people think –all they do is arouse a laughter
I sink away when I flow like an epigram author
While I’m at it I try to alter my alter ego before his ego decides to slaughter
He resides in my cerebral cortex though doctored
An animal, a beast that I fathered
Son’s tactical when I make up a tactic he makes up with my tact, shit
Keeps fucking with my mind, insists shit’s like incest
So when I reach for the pen my mind just likes to ingest
....Food for thought

[BILI]

That was dope It flowed good...rhymes were ok,nameplay is dope too
The issues issuing certain restraint issues
Shit’s cruel, and due humanity being that rude

[mcZu]

Thanks BILI

[gutawafang]

I could well rap it out. Quite good flow. I like the complexity of this piece.

Especially the phrase "acknowledge knowledge". That was good wordplay man. Awesome.

[mcZu]

Thanks Guta