i wonder, i wander

[Ka0t1c]

i know my problems sound like a broken album
so now i gotta show just how i'm gonna control my outcome
before i go or down under my soul will wander
in my own turmoil and spoil my hunger
well i'm not growin any younger
i want a home and also it aint no fun from a lonely number
cuz i'm all alone; only one because i've dug me a hole
and become numb but i wonder if there is another that can pull
me up and uncover my blindfold and open love cuz i'm cold
then hope i am stronger cuz i've had enough of the old
i'm ready for a longer and better episode instead cuz it's tougher
it's like i'm on a tether that holds me and i don't have to suffer
i'm after my gold to add a bit color, that path's a big goal
or i'd be trapped in a blunder and never capture my role
to cause thunder as i travel these roads, i would just run in circles
i must become a good hunter and master my foes

[gutawafang]

fucking sick flow homie.

simple and sweet context. I like that. Good rhyming, good multis, obviously.

I'd give it 9/10 because it lacks in the number of bars.

[Ka0t1c]

why, thank you!

[gutawafang]

why, thank you!

hahaha! why so shocked man?

[Ka0t1c]

pff...only a 9?


i'm just kidding!

[emzee-frenzy]

shit is way dope