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Postby gutawafang » Aug 14th, '09, 19:24

this is what happens to me when I feel bored
stab people up front, with real swords
when I mention your name, you don't have to feel sore
you don't have to hide behind steel doors
when I spit fire, I make the Amazon go extinct
with mere words I could make a better vaccine
than laughter the best medicine, I'm confident, period
don't just look away and be a prominent idiot
I cause hurricanes when I whistle
I make heavy rain from light drizzle
I create gunshots when I clap my hands
I make all shocked when I rap my stance
even Jackie Chan wouldn't need his skills to fight me
because everytime I fight I kill, now bite me
like a snake would with fangs of venom
shoot me in the head, but aim random
with one single rhyme, I could topple the eiffel like the "cobras"
replace your black undershirt with gold bras
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Re: 0224h

Postby classthe_king » Aug 14th, '09, 19:28

haha, some funny lines in their :y:
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Re: 0224h

Postby mcZu » Aug 14th, '09, 19:29

gutawafang wrote:with one single rhyme, I could topple the eiffel like the "cobras"
replace your black undershirt with gold bras


Nice punch :y:

A good piece considering it's out boredom :b:
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Re: 0224h

Postby gutawafang » Aug 14th, '09, 19:33

mcZu wrote:
gutawafang wrote:with one single rhyme, I could topple the eiffel like the "cobras"
replace your black undershirt with gold bras


Nice punch :y:

A good piece considering it's out boredom :b:

HAHA. Glad you noticed it's out of boredom. I did the whole shit in less than ten minutes man! :p Thanks for pointing out that punch, cuz I didn't even know it was a punch when i read it. :whistle:

Thanks, Scott and Class too. :D
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