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Random Shit (I found this in my files)

Postby Solace » Aug 15th, '09, 03:49

I see it's verse two, I've cursed through even my birth dude,
I'm evil? I could do worse too, don't make me verse you,
Mentally hurt you, scar you easily, let's see how a bar do,
Wanna battle? I'll throw you higher than Chet Starr dude,
Well let's stop, truce. Psych, like I give a fuck what you do,
Let's see you in the fucking booth, diss me? Well fuck you too,
Fucking prick, go fuck a succubus, try to start a ruckus bitch,
Showing off your talent only proves that you stay sucking dicks,
I love this fucking shit, well really only because it amuses me,
Acting like you're abusing me. You're a gangsta? Well move it G,
Portray your fake acts through music like you can do it, see,
You never shot someone, I see through you like thin fluid, G,
For you it's a lose-lose, no matter what type of situation,
Cause there are no loop-holes, a shoe you can't even lace it,
So what does the truth hold, I'll have you told then I shoot, ho,
Go back to your family roots, I mean go back to sumo (haha!).

So it starts off saying verse 2 so im guessing this was to be another part of something.
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Re: Random Shit (I found this in my files)

Postby Emadyville » Aug 15th, '09, 04:42

I kinda got a slow flow on this cause of all the doubles, thats how I read it, and I loved it, dope :y:
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: Random Shit (I found this in my files)

Postby Solace » Aug 15th, '09, 05:08

Good to hear man, thanks for the comment :flower:
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Postby Emadyville » Aug 15th, '09, 05:20

Solace wrote:Good to hear man, thanks for the comment :flower:


Yeah man all the shit you post is always pretty dope, keep writing :y:
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Re: Random Shit (I found this in my files)

Postby Solace » Aug 15th, '09, 05:25

Emadyville wrote:
Solace wrote:Good to hear man, thanks for the comment :flower:


Yeah man all the shit you post is always pretty dope, keep writing :y:

Thanks dude, I guess I've gone a long way heh.
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Re: Random Shit (I found this in my files)

Postby gutawafang » Aug 15th, '09, 09:47

haha. DAMN!!! :worship: It was quite good, not as good as expected though. But yeah, it's random. :happy:
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Re: Random Shit (I found this in my files)

Postby Solace » Aug 15th, '09, 17:45

Thanks both of you :worship:
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