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Re: Yo I kick it, mysterious

Postby Arabian Shady » Aug 15th, '09, 11:59

nice flow, stronger lyrics imo, that sars line was dope :y:
sick shit homie :b:
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Re: Yo I kick it, mysterious

Postby Xray » Aug 15th, '09, 12:51

Thanks for the comments everyone and backing me up on that statement. :b:
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Re: Yo I kick it, mysterious

Postby Xray » Aug 15th, '09, 14:04

$(@TTY B@Y wrote:
James R. wrote:I enjoyed the entire piece. Good job in all aspects. I liked the flow a lot. Probably my favorite aspect of the song.

Scott you act like rappers all over the place never borrow lines. Nas took a line directly from Rakim "I'm the R the A to the KIM if I wasn't then why would I say I am" Nas- "I'm the N the A to the SIR if I wasn't I must have been escobar." It's just something that happens especially with someone that a rapper looks up to. Obviously Sajjad likes Em. And that's just a very common view to have about success and that line puts it very well.


i know rappers borrow lines, but i think that's lame. and saying you couldn't give a fuck less about success, when you're not even sucessful is a bit .. meh. eminem said it, but he's successful, so it makes sense when he says it, 'cause he knows what success feels like. sajjad doesn't, so why say that. plus not giving a fuck about success is a bit weird, everyone wants to be successful.

and there's no point in trying to come back at me for this, coz its my opinion n it won't change.
You just solved your own little mystery there Sherlock Holmes. I don't give a fuck about success, because....
$(@TTY B@Y wrote:'cause he knows what success feels like. sajjad doesn't


Nah on the real, I don't have any intentions in being famous or being a rich, and you can get the fuck outta my thread with that Souljah Boy attitude. It's none of your fucking business what I think of success. Once you actually listen to some "Hip Hop" besides Eminem, then come back in here and make accusations till then fuck off and goodbye.
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Re: Yo I kick it, mysterious

Postby Xray » Aug 15th, '09, 14:27

$(@TTY B@Y wrote:calm down. i'm not making any accusations, i'm just saying that it didn't impress me. i'm sorry that i didn't think it was very good, but it's only what i think. so don't get so affected by it, please. and you're being a bit hypocritical, saying i'm making accusations, yet you accuse me of not listening to any hip hop other than eminem. you kind of contradicted yourself there :unsure:

and what exactly is a soulja boy attitude .. ? enlighten me.

it's none of your fucking business what i think of success


er .. mate, you said what you thought of success in the rap itself .. hmm, once again, contradicting yourself.

ps. being successful doesn't mean being famous or rich.

Lets start with the Souljah Boy attitude.... Weeks ago, you were saying how "rich and famous and successful" Souljah Boy was, and comparing him with TR rappers, and saying how much his better then us and how smart he is to make homosexual music and live the life he is...a coward in disguise... And now I mention that I don't give a fuck about success and you get all worked up about it because one of your favourite homo rappers happens to be the dumbest human being on earth and hates on real Hip Hop like the time he said "Nas is killing Hip Hop". And then you go on to say I bite it off Eminem, then Solace owned you. Then you go on and say
but i think that's lame. and saying you couldn't give a fuck less about success, when you're not even sucessful is a bit .. meh. eminem said it, but he's successful, so it makes sense when he says it, 'cause he knows what success feels like. sajjad doesn't, so why say that.

Ok so my line and point of view about success is lame, and Souljah Boy's lyrics isn't right? Every Hip Hop fan knows for a fact that Souljah Boy isn't a rapper. And why am I still being compared to Eminem when I thought Solace already proved that I didn't bite off Eminem?

$(@TTY B@Y wrote:i'm not making any accusations

Word?
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couldn't give a fuck less about success ..


don't bite eminem.


So umm go bump some youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu music cause that's all your good for. ;)
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Re: Yo I kick it, mysterious

Postby gutawafang » Aug 15th, '09, 15:12

been following this thread. come on we fam man. no beef. relax men. :D
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Re: Yo I kick it, mysterious

Postby James R. » Aug 15th, '09, 21:20

$(@TTY B@Y wrote:
James R. wrote:I enjoyed the entire piece. Good job in all aspects. I liked the flow a lot. Probably my favorite aspect of the song.

Scott you act like rappers all over the place never borrow lines. Nas took a line directly from Rakim "I'm the R the A to the KIM if I wasn't then why would I say I am" Nas- "I'm the N the A to the SIR if I wasn't I must have been escobar." It's just something that happens especially with someone that a rapper looks up to. Obviously Sajjad likes Em. And that's just a very common view to have about success and that line puts it very well.


i know rappers borrow lines, but i think that's lame. and saying you couldn't give a fuck less about success, when you're not even sucessful is a bit .. meh. eminem said it, but he's successful, so it makes sense when he says it, 'cause he knows what success feels like. sajjad doesn't, so why say that. plus not giving a fuck about success is a bit weird, everyone wants to be successful.

and there's no point in trying to come back at me for this, coz its my opinion n it won't change.

I know it's just retarded.
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Re: Yo I kick it, mysterious

Postby Xray » Aug 15th, '09, 21:30

Ok this shit is getting wayyyyyyyyyy out of hand. Time for me to explain my line, which I thought I already did in the actual fucking line if anyone even bothered fucking reading it.

preach to address, that, I could give a fuck less
about success, unless I'm blessed

Meaning I don't care about that shit, UNLESS I'M FUCKING BLESSED. Meaning unless I get blessed, and the right people check my shit out and give me a chance.

You get that Scotty?

Now please, quit talking about that line, for fucks sake and check the actual song out.

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