Pump It Up Keystyle

[mcZu]

Five min. keystyle on Joe Budden's Pump It Up, just a punch and bragg verse.
Feedback is appreciated as always, though.

You’re an illusion, just a hater
If you think your magic, then I’m the Lakers
Yes I’m greater…
Only thing you can do is dwell
Boy, I have you vanished in minutes like Hassani Campbell
It seems you can’t back up your points, well..
Act like the Nuggets camp and re-sign Anthony Carter
And don’t call me a starter…
I’m mo’ into ending shit like a Jihad martyr
It’s obvious I’m smarter, you just arouse a laughter
But dawg… don’t move like a cow, ‘cause you’ll get slaughtered
Keep fucking ‘round and you might get a daughter
And when you get caught, don’t be mad
Just act like Keith R. Griffin and blame one of your cats
Be like Shaggy and deny erry thing with a curse
You obviously can’t make people think with a verse
Better stop writing with that ink, sir
Or I’ll turn into Gregory Powell and bite of your fingers

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

content was pretty jumpy....its clearly you didnt take enough time to think about it...
but for what it is...would sound like a flawless freestyle

[mcZu]

content was pretty jumpy....its clearly you didnt take enough time to think about it...
but for what it is...would sound like a flawless freestyle

Thanks, yeah, it's kinda a freestyle.

[classthe_king]

Nice wordplay, good for a keystyle

[mcZu]

so i'ma Nate Robinson and back up the point - Joey

Nice wordplay, good for a keystyle

Thanks Class

[Fa-Q]

Pretty dope dude that first line was killer... I did something similar only it was magic and about his johnson

[mcZu]

Pretty dope dude that first line was killer... I did something similar only it was magic and about his johnson

Thanks man, yeah, I love sport metaphors

[gutawafang]

As usual homie, nameplay's awesome.

[mcZu]

As usual homie, nameplay's awesome.

Thanks Guta