I'm not sure if I posted it here before but I'm sure I can't find it.
Thanks in advance for the feedback. I believe I did this when TRshady was down, that's why it's not posted here.
this is the white screen, you might scream in your light dreams
fight scenes that you like being in your right genes
you may go sightseeing, prolly you tried singing
it won't change the plight you been in your night sins
mere rhyming it's clear defining i'm here refining
this fear outlining then disappearing shining
beer when dining cheers i'm climbing
back up to the sincere priming atmosphere's declining
i been scheming, you seen screaming and it's seeming
that i'm flying when i'm swimming, that's redeeming
the light's beaming and it's leaving, it ain't streaming
my mind's teeming with gleaming words and you ain't dreaming
never meant to rap so hard or that sort
never dreamt to stab your heart with a sword
clever attempts to map my mind cuz i'm so bored
forever redemptions that brag my rhymes in the court
Feedback? Thank you.
