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Random battling -me lost to him

Postby gutawafang » Aug 18th, '09, 08:40

Him
Yo I don't need to make it any more clearer
Cuz your presence here ain't gonna make you more dearer
We don't love you, check out my deep cuts
I'm above you, get out or I might rip guts

Me
If you just gonna swag before I even hurl my defense
I swear Arnold will be back, I leave the world in suspense
Cuz when I tell you to get down, make you look a clown
Your rhymes ain't gonna give me duke a crown

Him
You ain't in no position to be a king, I got a princess
My little daughter you'll probably be impressed
It's getting a little more intense
Don't shake anymore, you've already been tense

Me
Since the start, I knew I had the samurai sword on your neck
Cuz your rhymes so messed up, it's like sorta a wreck
Your boat's capsized, you can't swim, you're drowning
Just look at your face after these pills you're downing

Him
Who's doing drugs? You seem to be influenced by the industry
You whack rapper, your words ain't blast me
Trust me, you should go back to your seat cuz you lost it
Fame you can lust it but you ain't gonna cross it

Me
You ain't got no idea how I got here so be it
It don't matter how beautiful you see it
You ain't the judge, so you can't possibly touch me
There's no such thing, Eminem ain't even crush me

Him
You make me laugh, you make me smile, I ain't gay
You're the one biting off Eminem's tray
You seem to be happy to do it this way
But this last line shall put you to complete disarray

Me
I don't need to bite anything, it's just your imagination
Alright, this battle calls us for a celebration
Just wait for the annoncement in every radio station
Claiming you lost it instead and turn into a mental patient
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