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Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 20th, '09, 04:02

they call me Kaotic and i don't take orders too well cuz where i border is hell
and until i'm cornered in walls they can never quarantine my aura instilled
or i'd be under a spell if it wasn't for this key and this is how
i am going to tell about my story right now cuz war has a horrible smell
so i'm recording it all, everybody knows of it's downfalls already but i'll
show ya more, let's go forward towards the original floor where bullets do roar
rippin out many men's skin thru their pores as if they were swords rippin vocal cords...
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Disorder

Postby DrunkenDeath » Aug 20th, '09, 04:13

have you really been in war?
I'm that dude.

I want to talk shit, but i'll probably get banned for it from now on :sweating:

fuckin' stalkers.
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Re: Disorder

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 20th, '09, 04:20

yes, and i'm going back soon
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Disorder

Postby DrunkenDeath » Aug 20th, '09, 04:24

Just refuse to go back. Fuck the government.
I'm that dude.

I want to talk shit, but i'll probably get banned for it from now on :sweating:

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Re: Disorder

Postby gutawafang » Aug 20th, '09, 05:11

That was awesome Kaotic. Good multis. :y:
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Re: Disorder

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 20th, '09, 05:33

thanx :)
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Disorder

Postby Emadyville » Aug 20th, '09, 05:40

Deep shit again :y:

I admire you man for real, stay safe :y:
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Re: Disorder

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 20th, '09, 06:29

thanx, hope i get back so i can record a cd
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Disorder

Postby AnalKiddo » Aug 20th, '09, 06:53

MAKE THEM LISTEN MOSH! FIGHT THE POWER, VOTE EMINEM lol
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Cause the shit I hear is crazy
But your either getting lazy or you don't believe in you no more
Seems like your own opinions, not one you can form
Cant make a decision you keep questioning yourself
Second guessing and its almost like your begging for my help

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Re: Disorder

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 20th, '09, 07:07

...thanx :whistle:
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Re: Disorder

Postby Xray » Aug 20th, '09, 07:17

Has a Vinnie Paz flow to it, I liked it. Just make sure if you go out, you go out with a bang homie. :b:
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Re: Disorder

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 20th, '09, 07:26

hmm :-k, i'm not familiar with him so i'm checkin youtube now, thanx
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Re: Disorder

Postby Xray » Aug 20th, '09, 08:22

:o Damn, check his 2006 album 'Servants in Heaven, Kings in Hell'. His from Jedi Mind Tricks, also in Army Of The Pharaohs.
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Re: Disorder

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 20th, '09, 08:32

ok, thanx for that info... i'll be checkin that out soon
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