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Fighting Writer's block ,

Postby J Roc » Aug 21st, '09, 18:33

Lightwork cuz it's all that's in my arsenal

Paint is Art & The Day is Dark, i'll 'Fight for your love' then "Break" your heart
Where's the money You-Touch? Food Ur Fridge is "Souped-Up".. Like Racing Car's
Face The Bar's i'm so hot-Man ya'll should get "Roc-Banned" Like Fake Guitar's
Listen to us Ripping you up, a Savage with "Fast-Hits" like Twista in clubs
Chicken is tough? Send-Blaze's Then-J'll set these "Men-Straight" If you Think Your a 'Blood'
Mad at Roc Since , Half What Ya'll Spit i thought of first... You Should Have a Topic
Afterall Bitch My Flow Has-Syph so I leave the whole "Class-Sick" Like Nas's Album's
Ask me who;s ill as that^^^?... Ya'll should Chill with rap & Leave it to me cuzz i'll Rip the Track
The Fury Shot's ah Leave .... Soo Trust me it ain't Curiosity that Killed this cat

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Re: Fighting Writer's block ,

Postby mcZu » Aug 21st, '09, 18:48

Not bad, a bit average, though. Only line I really liked was the class sick/klassick punch.
Keep it up, a writer's block suck's big time. :y:
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Re: Fighting Writer's block ,

Postby J Roc » Aug 21st, '09, 18:49

Wordd Zu lol ... Thanks for the feed lol .
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Re: Fighting Writer's block ,

Postby Emadyville » Aug 21st, '09, 19:17

I enjoyed it, and that classic/class-sick line was dope, I've read better from you but this was still a great read, hope you're out of that writin block shit soon homie :y:
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Re: Fighting Writer's block ,

Postby BILI » Aug 21st, '09, 22:43

that was pretty good considering writers block
and yeah that classic/class-sick is dope :worship: :worship:
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