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My first drop ever!!!!

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My first drop ever!!!!

Postby M.O.E » Aug 22nd, '09, 05:01

this is a verse i wrote a long time ago on another rapsite ima copy and paste it here so you can see it this was my very 1st verses i had ever done lmao u can tell how i didn't use any multis at all lmao let me kno wat u think....


i got more issues then the posts n dis thread, dats an understatment of wat goes on in my head...
i wanna flatline, while im layn n bed, and cook a fuckin cat up so my stomach is fed//

im fucked in da head, like i got a dick in my ear, man im something to fear...
ive planned out 30 murders you wana listen or hear, i gotem writtin out, about my closest of pears//

da dearest of dears, man i have no reason to care, i snatch peoples animals and strip dem of hair...
i know im unfair, im killin for fun no need for a dare, you know who ima stomp by the way dat i stair//

u wana hear a scare, wen someone dies it gets me hard, i cant come back in the world, im way to far...
i wana have a disease sumtin like sars, so i can spit it on da world like im spittin dese bars//

my lungs full of tar, from the cigerattes now, i wana murder a birthday party while dressed as a clown...
i wana be like da zodiac killa and terrorize towns, i wana be da santa dat puts da kids in da ground//*

my face covered in frowns, man how can dis be, how can anybody have as many problems like me...
cuz man killin people used to give me wet dreams, i even ate da dude so deres no murder scene//

u should be grateful to see, how my life stands, i would love to take a hatchet to ya head man...
i know no matter wat i say you wont understand, so if my knife dont kill ya den my machete can//

u got it fam, im crazier den scotch we aint on da same level, cuz if an animal cums in front of me i step on da pedal...
man i must've been sent by da devil, cuz i put da "star" on my bullets so when i blast im passin out medals//

my head aint quite level, so i keep my mouth shut, so you don't wana stunt....
man i hate dat word its a played little fuck, anyway... step out to me and ill speed up my truck//

now dey tryin to duck, so if you ever hear on da news, a man got shot wit his dudes...
or when you hear of a woman who was killed in a fuid, think of me and give me my dues//
i want to write something that you will remember....
M.O.E
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