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My Son

Postby MC Anonymous » Aug 22nd, '09, 02:01

I worship the sun, so I worship my seed
Cause in any single day it could be better then me
his letters are free, his words are intoxication
He's boxing nations, his glocks are blazin
I cut his throat and then I eat his soul
I'm speakin whole, a reapin' seepin coal
he's sleeping cold, eternal nocturnals
ground slippin, pounds rippin, the blocks burn toast
his skin melts in my palms, skeletal system
a victim of rippin and slittin pistons
body contusions, every slice cuts deeper
shadows lurkin, I'm the night of reapers
I've bashed him up, he's no longer here
Anonymous stays clear, droppin bombs in his sphere
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: My Son

Postby classthe_king » Aug 22nd, '09, 04:12

It was good, although short. Had alot of good rhymes in it.
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Re: My Son

Postby emzee-frenzy » Aug 22nd, '09, 07:36

props for the drop man :flower:
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Re: My Son

Postby macdaddy019967 » Aug 22nd, '09, 07:49

awesome...keep posting i love reading your stuff :y:
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Re: My Son

Postby gutawafang » Aug 22nd, '09, 09:35

Good. :y:
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Re: My Son

Postby Spyder » Aug 22nd, '09, 22:53

seen some of those rhymes form ur stuff before :shifty:
but nice quick drop, to keep us happy while your gone ;)
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Re: My Son

Postby Requiem » Aug 23rd, '09, 03:24

nice drop man. its good to see you using a different structure on ur lines. the rhymes were pretty sick, tho the toast one threw me off. :sweating:
nice man :8)
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