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Postby emzee-frenzy » Aug 23rd, '09, 10:53

dellusional slick prick, unusual sick kid in a delirium mindstate
lithium carbonate and fenobarbitate till my cranium starts to ache
muscle spasms hard to take inflicting pain into my brain while moral falls
like crashing planes, you get smashed and slain, catched and hanged
like Saddam Hussein when you rap in vain lookin insanly lame like Gucci mane
kidnaping women for fuck's sake i conduct rape, covering mouths with duct tape
while corpses putreficate, worms crawling in whore remains dispersing hate
contagious germs spreading like aids, dangerous like rotating spike blades
decapitating dreams like guillotines blood staining clean pillow sheets
facing the death sentence, acused of crimes against humanity decandence
psychological evidence proove my rhymes suggest insanity Medicaments
victorious voices reversing venomous curses compeling conceiled corpses
obituary notice verse like cemetery registers, killed mc's list administer
you little pussy, whore it's pay-back time like lucifer being crucified
misoginistic mysteries missunderstood by missing mistresses,
throat slitting bitches in public then start killing witnesses
i crack skulls with flat dishes, then cats float in the Pacific like catfishes.
"misoginistic mysteries missunderstood by missing mistresses,
throat slitting bitches in public then start killing witnesses" - emzee
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Postby Jay-19 » Aug 23rd, '09, 14:24

Damn bro... that's some fuck-your-tongue-up shit right there man! :y:
Liked a lot of the lines, some were too hard for me to get a flow with but it's all individual so I'm sure you can flow it well!

misoginistic mysteries missunderstood by missing mistresses
throat slitting bitches in public then start killing witnesses


That lines is motherfucking ill! :worship:
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Re: Best shit i wrote in a long time - check it out

Postby emzee-frenzy » Aug 23rd, '09, 15:16

damn guys, didn't expect this , thx jay a lot man and i love youre audio shit, and thank's coleon yeah i know the comparision was complementary and i take it that way cause anon is sick as fuck :y: :flower:
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Postby classthe_king » Aug 23rd, '09, 18:44

Haha, that was dope :worship: . Like coleon said, reminded me alot of anon. Keep it up :flower:
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Postby emzee-frenzy » Aug 24th, '09, 06:21

thabk's a lot man :flower:
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Postby Xray » Aug 24th, '09, 06:25

Looks good in text, but it looks like its nearly impossible to flow.
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Postby gutawafang » Aug 24th, '09, 06:36

Awesome vocab. I guess that's your strength man. :worship:
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Postby Noeezy » Aug 24th, '09, 08:31

yeah.. if you can flow that... :o
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Postby emzee-frenzy » Aug 25th, '09, 06:06

yeah, thanks a lot guy, it's kinda hard to flow but not so impossible :flower:
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