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Somethin random

Postby BILI » Aug 25th, '09, 00:29

This is more of a freestyle :D

I`m comin wit this new shit,I just can`t resist not to spit
Man theres somethin you`ll never hear,and its that i quit
And don`t try to spit the shit that I spit cause your heart˙ll stop
You`ll just shut down,and you`ll need to fuckin restart on spot
Sometimes I go 2 crazy wit my rhymes,and sometimes not
I just go and spit radomly whatever comes to my mind
If you don`t think this shit`s hot,man you`r fuckin blind
I`m so fuckin good at this,thers none that I couldn`t diss

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Re: Somethin random

Postby classthe_king » Aug 25th, '09, 00:37

haha, good for a freestyle, for you. Loved those multi's your improving.
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Re: Somethin random

Postby D'Leh » Aug 25th, '09, 00:41

finally multies good freestyle!!! :y:
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Re: Somethin random

Postby BILI » Aug 25th, '09, 00:48

thx guys :worship: :worship: ...I dont know how I spit this shit,I was on Facebook and it just fuckin hit me..lmao
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Re: Somethin random

Postby BILI » Aug 25th, '09, 21:27

bump :whistle:
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Re: Somethin random

Postby Slim Zaddy » Aug 26th, '09, 10:17

lol , good freestyle homie ,, i can see you're good , multies is pretty nice ,, try to make it up longer , but it was great ,, keep them comming :y:
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Re: Somethin random

Postby BILI » Aug 26th, '09, 11:16

Slim Zaddy wrote:lol , good freestyle homie ,, i can see you're good , multies is pretty nice ,, try to make it up longer , but it was great ,, keep them comming :y:

thx a lot man :flower:
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