Bettering Myself

[Ka0t1c]

i'm sure out there, not everybody will treasure my skill
but still, i'm really ready for the battlefield
cuz i have been building myself up better i feel
and nothing else matters, until i'm dead or am killed
i want all my letters revealed cuz this is no drill
i'm head over heels like i'm addicted to pills
which i never can chill since i'm at a heavy level
yes sir, it's that big of a deal but first i must master my realm
before it gets transferred to film so i ask to get help
the best answer's don't doubt but under pressure i'm held
tho i shouldn't panic, my fault but i can't even tell
if i'm travelling backwards to fail, now i'm lettin in guilt
damn the devil to hell, he led me to filth, yet i allowed
on my path, how did the spell cast, my only guess is, oh well
i'm not after my past cuz i have excelled fast from them nasty dark clouds...

[mcZu]

I enjoyed it. Started out good, and it just got better and better. I just feel like 'dark clouds' is out of place, but if this verse is part of a longer song.. it could work out.

[D'Leh]

good shit man

[Ka0t1c]

thanx for the great comments, i just wrote this last week

[Ka0t1c]

thanks a lot scott!

[Slim Zaddy]

i'm sure out there, not everybody will treasure my skill
but still, i'm really ready for the battlefield
cuz i have been building myself up better i feel
and nothing else matters, until i'm dead or am killed
i want all my letters revealed cuz this is no drill
i'm head over heels like i'm addicted to pills
tho i shouldn't panic, my fault but i can't even tell
if i'm travelling backwards to fail, now i'm lettin in guilt
...

damn , these lines are sick , i love the emotions in it , i can feel what you are trying to say , lyrics were good , rhymes are great , it can fit as a song ,, deep shit man , keep it up

[Ka0t1c]

thanx, i appreciate the comments