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Problem's Keystyle

Postby AOBrien09 » Aug 26th, '09, 14:54

I feel like I've hit a dead end, can't get out,
these problem's just keep spreadin, tryna sort them now,
is a little to late, I've allowed them to esculate,
to a greater problem, I hate, is this a test to late,
that I can't pass, had a chance but why then didn't I ask,
for help on the task, now it's pilin up too fast,
an it's windin me up, feel's like a tyson uppercut,
the way it's got me knocked down, fightin but,
I feel like givin up, life is tough, a touch too rough,
leave ya bruised and you can't budge the stuff,
aside, like 3am song there's no place to hide,
you try to hide it, but it's a waiste of a disguise,
chase the dream but all am chasin is demise,
wanna seem happy so now am chasin this high,
from the weed a need to let off steam,
it's the only way I'l set off an see my dream,

a quick short keystyle and abit personal :shifty:
Last edited by AOBrien09 on Aug 26th, '09, 22:23, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: Problem's Keystyle

Postby Joe M » Aug 26th, '09, 16:57

this was good man, especially for a keystyle.

flow was good throughout, only thing I wud say is to work on your use of multi's.

keep droppin
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Re: Problem's Keystyle

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 26th, '09, 17:35

and it would be easier to understand it better by changing those a's to I's
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Problem's Keystyle

Postby AOBrien09 » Aug 26th, '09, 22:20

Joe M wrote:this was good man, especially for a keystyle.

flow was good throughout, only thing I wud say is to work on your use of multi's.

keep droppin


Thnks :flower:

Kaotic wrote:and it would be easier to understand it better by changing those a's to I's


Yeah a see what you mean :sweating:
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Re: Problem's Keystyle

Postby gutawafang » Aug 27th, '09, 03:25

Flow was okay. Multis need improvement.
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