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Kill YourSelf, Zaddy Is Back ( N.E.W )

Postby Slim Zaddy » Aug 25th, '09, 15:01

been a long time since i wrote here so feedback is appreciated :worship:

This shit gets so old being a spectacle,
Undress my soul and see my spirit naked blessed and whole,
Respectable but not treated respectfully,
Fuck All the voters - We should be electin' me,
Just check your seat, under it's the bomb I placed,
The long debate's over and I know it's all gone to waste,
This economy based on monopoly money's what we otta replace,
Thanks for the fake gold and copper we just put in our pockets and banks!
I'm a lesson filled with what I learned from thought provoking,
This rock and roll thing died when I decided I've not been joking,
Fuck this pot and liquor shot, I just had a moment of clarity,
I lost every good woman that thought they would eventually marry me,
I turned into the scary me, the guy who's quiet and hates this
Life and wants to riot and take a tire iron to racists,
Fly on a spaceship and leave this planet like Kris Kain,
It's my turn but I'm so fucking tired of this game,
At 18 I lived in a daydream and thought I was smart,
I thought I could never fill up my fucking bottomless heart,
But all of it starts to catch up as you age quickly,
Fuck TR, Fuck my job, FUCK EVERYONE --- Say it with me,
I give up - I'm done - Fuck inspiration,
I want you to want to quit, too, and think of self-inflicted strangulation,
Just bang your face in and hang yourself in your closet,
Keep looking for my mind - I threw it away, I haven't lost it,
Turn on the faucet and wait until the bath is hot,
Then plug in a toaster and drop it in and laugh a lot,
I load a pistol and stick my head in the oven,
And play russian roulette to see which kills me first - The weapon or plug-in,
Just follow suit and put your car in neutral,
Lay down behind it on a hill and look at the stars til' you spill
Out of your own head and you're finally
Freed from your body and mind and you've died with me,
If you're too scared now, just wait, you'll get the itch,
Suicide's easy - It's just fucking Life's a bitch.
I write this shit to ease the pain,
She's to blame, If we cut our wrists like this we bleed the same!
Evil came and struck me sightless but I see the game,
And tonight this is just me pumping my right fist to lead the change...
I may be the slavery,
I may be the occupation,
I may even maybe be the way we all stay in
Side of our boxes, like Christ on our crosses,
We've gotta die to be resurrected by whatever God is...

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Re: Kill YourSelf, Zaddy Is Back ( N.E.W )

Postby tjb » Aug 25th, '09, 16:21

tht shits rele hot :y: :y: :y:
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Re: Kill YourSelf, Zaddy Is Back ( N.E.W )

Postby King Bullet » Aug 25th, '09, 16:37

dope shit...just think you could back that last line up with somethin' like:whatever THE God is...otherwise,dope. :y: :y: :y: :y: :y:
At least I know that I don't know...question is: are you bozos smart enough to feel stupid?!-hope so!!!
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Re: Kill YourSelf, Zaddy Is Back ( N.E.W )

Postby D'Leh » Aug 25th, '09, 17:11

great shit man!! are you italian?
Let me eat your pussy while I shave you!
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Re: Kill YourSelf, Zaddy Is Back ( N.E.W )

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 25th, '09, 20:03

that was the best i've seen from you, i like how the attitude is on this... some deep shit, great lyrics
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Kill YourSelf, Zaddy Is Back ( N.E.W )

Postby mcZu » Aug 25th, '09, 20:33

I only got one complaint, the structure. Besides that it is definitly one of your best.
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Re: Kill YourSelf, Zaddy Is Back ( N.E.W )

Postby BILI » Aug 26th, '09, 00:22

Yeah man it was dope,some pretty good rhymes,and it was deep man,I like it

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Re: Kill YourSelf, Zaddy Is Back ( N.E.W )

Postby gutawafang » Aug 26th, '09, 02:07

Been a long time homie. :y:

Some pretty good multis here and there. I liked the vocabulary used. :worship:
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Re: Kill YourSelf, Zaddy Is Back ( N.E.W )

Postby Slim Zaddy » Aug 26th, '09, 13:50

^^^^thanks guys ,, much appreciated ,, glad you all liked it :worship:


zurditoshady wrote:great shit man!! are you italian?


yup :flower: ,,, it's my second home country
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Re: Kill YourSelf, Zaddy Is Back ( N.E.W )

Postby Arabian Shady » Aug 27th, '09, 07:24

reallli well written, nice flow to the whole verse
swag's pretty good on this 1 :y:
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So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: Kill YourSelf, Zaddy Is Back ( N.E.W )

Postby Slim Zaddy » Aug 27th, '09, 17:04

Arabian Shady wrote:reallli well written, nice flow to the whole verse
swag's pretty good on this 1 :y:
Peace


THANKS HOMIE , been along time... feed is much appreciated :worship:
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Re: Kill YourSelf, Zaddy Is Back ( N.E.W )

Postby Drama Setter » Aug 27th, '09, 17:36

Welcome back bro and nice drop . :flower:
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Re: Kill YourSelf, Zaddy Is Back ( N.E.W )

Postby Solace » Aug 27th, '09, 18:21

Welcome back Zaddy! Dope shit dude, really enjoyed it.

Fuck TR, Fuck my job, FUCK EVERYONE --- Say it with me,


how could you :'(


lmao oh and mind returning feed on my new guess whos fuckin back piece?
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Re: Kill YourSelf, Zaddy Is Back ( N.E.W )

Postby Slim Zaddy » Aug 27th, '09, 18:35

drama setter wrote:Welcome back bro and nice drop . :flower:


welcomed are all to you bro, and thanks for the feed :y:

Solace wrote:Welcome back Zaddy! Dope shit dude, really enjoyed it.

Fuck TR, Fuck my job, FUCK EVERYONE --- Say it with me,


how could you :'(


lmao oh and mind returning feed on my new guess whos fuckin back piece?


common man ,, TR is the best site for me ,, so it's a humor at the end of the day :whistle: ... thanks for the feed bro ,, much appreciated :y:
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