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Re: Guess Who's Fuckin' Back

Postby Requiem » Aug 27th, '09, 19:42

this is one of the best pieces i've seen from you. the flow was consistent, and the multies/rhymes were really good. it felt a bit lengthy, but it was all dope :)
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Re: Guess Who's Fuckin' Back

Postby Solace » Aug 27th, '09, 19:47

Thanks man :y:
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Re: Guess Who's Fuckin' Back

Postby SajN » Aug 27th, '09, 19:52

This was not good..


























It was amazing :worship:
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Re: Guess Who's Fuckin' Back

Postby Solace » Aug 27th, '09, 19:56

Thanks man :smoking:

And for I second I thought I was goin' get a warning for wackness :o
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Re: Guess Who's Fuckin' Back

Postby SajN » Aug 27th, '09, 20:25

Solace wrote:Thanks man :smoking:

And for I second I thought I was goin' get a warning for wackness :o

Hmm... Good idea :-k
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Re: Guess Who's Fuckin' Back

Postby Solace » Aug 28th, '09, 01:00

SajN wrote:
Solace wrote:Thanks man :smoking:

And for I second I thought I was goin' get a warning for wackness :o

Hmm... Good idea :-k

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Re: Guess Who's Fuckin' Back

Postby classthe_king » Aug 28th, '09, 01:03

Haha, great to see you back to :worship: Awesome track, flow, rhymes pretty much everything was perfect.
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Re: Guess Who's Fuckin' Back

Postby Solace » Aug 28th, '09, 01:17

classthe_king wrote:Haha, great to see you back to :worship: Awesome track, flow, rhymes pretty much everything was perfect.

Thanks man :worship:

if i have time tommorow i shall drop another verse like this
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Re: Guess Who's Fuckin' Back

Postby Spyder » Aug 28th, '09, 01:22

damn right you will :shifty:
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Re: Guess Who's Fuckin' Back

Postby Xray » Aug 28th, '09, 04:13

It was alright man. It flowed well, the rhymes felt smooth. But could of used more punchlines, I don't know but it felt like it was lacking in terms of punches.
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Re: Guess Who's Fuckin' Back

Postby Solace » Aug 28th, '09, 05:01

Props on the feed, yeah i do need more punches, even I feel it had like 0 punches in here.
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