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Just About Money? [Keystyle]

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Just About Money? [Keystyle]

Postby mcZu » Aug 25th, '09, 19:29

Every one aims for that green, fam.
Guess that’s why the game turned into Oliver Queen, man.
They all try to be on the Cover of a magazine, damnn…
Talking ‘bout being the best in NY; BK vs. Queens…Hence;
Hip hop fading away quite fast
I can imagine why people don’t like rap
It’s al ‘bout a dance, they dismiss lyrics A-SAP
When money is on the table, it’s quite sad
I declare them war, why?
‘cause they ask for it, see I mind, and I aint talking ‘bout an MRI.. Damn..
I walk in this game w/ just one thought in mind
Rhyme for the sake of creativity, I aint into those faulty rhymes
Display words that’ll leave ya in a disarray
Vertigo, due to my verbal flow, head lines like a quick fade
Swift blade, verbs added to some adverb with adverse
In each part that I add to a verse
So, that said, I just needed to vent w/ out trying to curse….
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
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Re: Just About Money? [Keystyle]

Postby Spyder » Aug 25th, '09, 20:23

ill man, felt it son
great rhymes in there and some creativity
especially top notch for a keystyle :worship:
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Re: Just About Money? [Keystyle]

Postby mcZu » Aug 25th, '09, 20:27

Thanks my eight-legged-fellow-general. :b:
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Re: Just About Money? [Keystyle]

Postby D'Leh » Aug 25th, '09, 20:44

great shit homie!!!! :worship:
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Re: Just About Money? [Keystyle]

Postby mcZu » Aug 25th, '09, 21:04

Thanks Zurdito :b:
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Re: Just About Money? [Keystyle]

Postby BILI » Aug 25th, '09, 21:35

Wow man this was one really really dope stuff.I love it :worship:

If you wanna feed back just check some of my late stuff ;)
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Re: Just About Money? [Keystyle]

Postby mcZu » Aug 26th, '09, 00:54

Thanks BILI :b: :b:
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Re: Just About Money? [Keystyle]

Postby Slim Zaddy » Aug 26th, '09, 10:10

this one fit as a freestyle ,, for me , topic is great , and you write about it perfectly ,, it's one from the best i hve seen from yeah ,, hot shit man ,, i enjoyed reading it ,, keep ti up :flower:
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Re: Just About Money? [Keystyle]

Postby mcZu » Aug 26th, '09, 13:05

Thanks Zaddy, appreciate it :b:
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Re: Just About Money? [Keystyle]

Postby Just Silver » Aug 28th, '09, 21:04

mcZu wrote:Every one aims for that green, fam.
Guess that’s why the game turned into Oliver Queen, man.
They all try to be on the Cover of a magazine, damnn…
Talking ‘bout being the best in NY; BK vs. Queens…Hence;
Hip hop fading away quite fast
I can imagine why people don’t like rap
It’s al ‘bout a dance, they dismiss lyrics A-SAP
When money is on the table, it’s quite sad
I declare them war, why?
‘cause they ask for it, see I mind, and I aint talking ‘bout an MRI.. Damn..
I walk in this game w/ just one thought in mind
Rhyme for the sake of creativity, I aint into those faulty rhymes
Display words that’ll leave ya in a disarray
Vertigo, due to my verbal flow, head lines like a quick fade
Swift blade, verbs added to some adverb with adverse
In each part that I add to a verse
So, that said, I just needed to vent w/ out trying to curse….


5/5 this is grade-a shit right here

The intro really drags you into it
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Re: Just About Money? [Keystyle]

Postby mcZu » Aug 28th, '09, 21:54

Thanks Silver :b:
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