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Mic Bust

Postby MC Anonymous » Aug 29th, '09, 20:53

Shoot dope bars outta bullets that are bigger then eight balls
see me in the street bouncing quicker then late calls
swallowing my bust like these porno flick bitches
grip it, clip shit like a hollywood finish
filled with the green? now get ate like fried vegtables
dick in your pussy now you're really bisexual
rip your chest off, rip your breasts off, get lost
take your velcro vest off, couldn't save from test coughs
come in with the twevle guage buck shot, lets not
get into a confrontation, you don't wanna get shot
Why you running from Anonymous, you started it
you departing kid? I'll run at you and rip your fuckin' heart and shit
I write every single thing when it comes to the rhymes
if it guns to my mind, then it is spun on the line
Put my life on the line like a trapese artist
go to your apartment start bending your carcass

I'm an eplileptic siezure, side affect of my shine
Cause when I rhyme, flow shakes all along the fuckin' tide
I'm insane like I stepped into my brain with flames
spit it out of my frame, that's why I steam when it rains
waves make the ground shake, heavy cream like pound cakes
rounds bake, sound breaks, spit it and the town shakes
spit flames that will melt all the iron in your body
till you shoot out liquidated metal like a melting shotty
before I came I was even drilling life
the shine from my embryo was type of killing light
as a fetus, couldn't believe this, coming hard from my penis
already a genius, practicing on the cord like pianists
you will never get me, you will never see me
you will never see me on the tv or listen to CD's
cause you couldn't CD's, you just a weak G
get more then you from the green bay packers, WEEKLY
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Mic Bust

Postby classthe_king » Aug 30th, '09, 18:58

Finally had time to give feed. It was good, but thats it. Nothing special for you, but still better then most peoples work. The rhyming was dope and the flow was good. A good track to record. All in all, pretty much dope, had alot of great lines.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Mic Bust

Postby gutawafang » Aug 30th, '09, 19:25

As usual. I don't know why but when I read your verse, it's usually sounds YOU. :p
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