Broken II - 2.2 Scars

[gutawafang]

Wondering if a rap should do it, to undress the beauty
If it just could do it, I would address my duty
A song with no chorus would do, 32 bars again
To transfer my 2-point-2 scars of pain
Have your face slapped, two ways fag, asap
Dont bother to wave flags, it can't save facts
It still be the same acts you commited to gain tracks
It's prolly a feign-act you admitted to regain that
So I make no sense huh? Keystyles and shits like this
I should spend 100 minutes to write this
But instead I believe I'll end this in five minutes
Continuous 2.2 scars, I'll feel alive in it
I told you I hate you bitch, don't talk to me
You're a fucking dog to me, female, this is tupac in me
Sympathy no, I ain't trying to attain that
Would you and I gain by saying that?
A song without melody huh? I'm killing you still
You don't get what I'm feeling, you feel?
I be in court, you think I be appealing and kneel?
All your fucking belongings, I'll be willing to steal
I wanna take away everything, like you took mine
If I die, I come back with some spook-signs
Go back and read your fucking books-science
You think I want you back? Wait, that's another puke-line
It's history and I'm recording it, the danger-bus you're boarding it
The readers applauding it, when I'm exploding it
My dynamite destroys you, one shot of a gun do
Impact's just too strong too, where you gon' run to?
In fact, I wrote this song in ten minutes, let's leave this
I'm tired of pen-bitches, so let's beef this
Once you reply me, I shall hit you back with a switch
And you'll face me with this rap's wack like a bitch

PS: Really ten minutes. I timed it by playing two songs continuously in the background.

[Slim Zaddy]

for 10 min , dude this rocks ,, i liked your multies ,, you have some good lines ,, keep it up ,, you're almost there

[gutawafang]

for 10 min , dude this rocks ,, i liked your multies ,, you have some good lines ,, keep it up ,, you're almost there

I think my strength is only multis. I can't flow, I can't nameplay and wordplay.

But thanks man.

[Slim Zaddy]

for 10 min , dude this rocks ,, i liked your multies ,, you have some good lines ,, keep it up ,, you're almost there

I think my strength is only multis. I can't flow, I can't nameplay and wordplay.

But thanks man.

well multies can help the flow a lot , so you got the multies ability , so a little work on the flow , and you will write sick verses,, try to flow it over a beat and write it over a beat ,, and let the rhymes flows on your head before ,, and then use your multies strength ,, .. nameplay and wordplay , are easy ,, you just can practice it with a few effort ,

[gutawafang]

Thanks for the encouragement homie. I love you man.

[Slim Zaddy]

Thanks for the encouragement homie. I love you man.

anytime bro , love you too .. no homo guys lol

[D'Leh]

dope multias, good flow, good rhymes dude!! keep it coming

[gutawafang]

dope multias, good flow, good rhymes dude!! keep it coming

Arigato. Thanks for checking it out homie.

[classthe_king]

I agree lol, your multis are your strong suit. The only way to work on the flow is what Zaddy said, keep rapping it over and over again on a beat until you get it down. And try to make the piece go together without pauses.

[gutawafang]

I agree lol, your multis are your strong suit. The only way to work on the flow is what Zaddy said, keep rapping it over and over again on a beat until you get it down. And try to make the piece go together without pauses.

Yeah. I'll take note man. Thanks for checking it. Appreciate it.

[gutawafang]

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