Drunk and Angry Freestyle

[lil_bayly]

Ayo, on the first flip, i spit the worst shit
i make the verse hit and make me curse Nick
This aint a warning shot I'll get at this absurd bitch
leave her feelin like she did when she found out my words slit
Writs and necks, all disrepect
im twisting bets and lettin out the diss and techs
Some say im angry, that they should hang me
well fuck all u haters that believe this bitch aint banging
Half the city, my rhymes is gritty
she got more kids then the Wayans family. shitty
DNA tested more times than Jurrasic Park
body all gleamy and white but her ass is dark
A massive spark explodes like a backwards dart
i kno u feelin this rhyme like it was glassend sharp
Internationally ive been intentionally
spittin this shit for free, i see its totally meant to be
I spit a rhyme a week, i drop bombs and she
keeps her fucking mouth closed like she's got no time to speak
Only when dicks's available, Bitch a silly ho
Tricki's vagina looks like its been hillbilly-ed yo
Want me to be honest? R u astonished?
Nicki Moate's toon towns biggest slut, i promise
U got something on us? Well do u want us
To spit an explanation? Ok bitch here comes the chorus



Feed back plzz

[lil_bayly]

feed back u fucking faggots, or is that when u read this u couldnt believe this skill exists on this forum? 24 views and all of them left speechless. Im flattered, thank u all

[Slim Zaddy]

first of all , fix the structure bro so i can read it at least ,, this looks like a story or journal not a freestyle .. once you fixed it , i will give ya my feed ..

[lil_bayly]

structure? but this is how it fits dude, this is how id spit it to a beat, how do i change that?

[Slim Zaddy]

Ayo, on the first flip, i spit the worst shit,
i make the verse hit and make me curse Nick
This aint a warning shot I'll get at this absurd bitch,
leave her feelin like she did when she found out my words slit
Writs and necks, all disrepect, im twisting bets
and lettin out the diss and techs
Some say im angry, that they should hang me,
well fuck all u haters that believe this bitch aint banging

like this dude ,, for example

[Emadyville]

Yeah ^ like that, and I enjoyed it it was pretty good
Rhymes stood out, good multies

[gutawafang]

Thanks Zaddy for fixing the structure. Yeah, this freestyle is pretty good man. It multis pretty well.

[lil_bayly]

oh i get wat ur sayin, ok i fixed it now, plz feedback on this guys

[gutawafang]

Good nameplay.