RAP CLOWN

[Cookzee]

im feeling like a rap clown who's been pushed back down
everytime i rise up yo i feel like crap now
an in the background haters come attack now
so i say summit controversial and thats how
i stay at the top and i will never flop
i got this shit locked im the devil on pop
and if you hate me, i'll be open and say that i hate you
take you wrap rope around your neck and break you! (COMON)
like i did mcanne, she's in the back of my van
i tied her up muffled her with anthax and
i drive so fast she could see a city a day
but if she wakes i'll take her curiousity away (HAHA)
and damage, i don't give a fuck who doesn't listen
im still reminissin back when me and yo bitch where kissin
you saying yeah but i've fucked her, that's where i've been to
how u gon fink u know me, u don't know what i've been through

give me some feedback, don't just hate either make it contructive

[Cookzee]

Bump

[classthe_king]

Good rhymes, and flow. It was easy to catch on to. Some lines didnt make sense but an overall good track, keep working.

[Drama Setter]

not bad , bro you are very good at rhyming , keep it up and be in touch

[gutawafang]

The multis are dope.

[Slim Zaddy]

not bad at all , you have nice multies , rhymes were nice too ,, but yeah some lines dont make sense,, and flow is kindly on and off ,, but good try ... keep it up