lemme know what ya think... i want brutal honesty

[staten island shady]

hip hops been lost but we here about to save it
cuz our lyrics and our flows, on our verses make u crave it
straight out of the dungeon where hip hop started
new york, new york, out here dont act retarted
cause if u start beef, my crew will definatly finish
cause we crazy motha fuckers who aint got no fucken limits
i swear to god we here for brinigin hip hop back
cause right about now it seems like hip hops wack
nobody whose raping, got any fucken heart
and having heart in this game is how hip hop got its start
nobody makes songs just for the love of rap
thats y all this musics just some one-hit-wonder crap
every1 makes records just to try to get some air-time
and beacuse all this pop shit it seems like no1 can rhyme
but we gunnna bring it back and b some hiphops saviors
so catch us in the booth just destroyin all the haters

[Slim Zaddy]

it's a good drop , you have some good lines , but rest is meh ,, flow is nice ,, but this can be done a lot better ,,,, anyway ,, you still new , so still ,, keep on writing and ya will be better for sure ,,

[staten island shady]

thanks man appreciate the feedback

[emzee-frenzy]

i used to rap like that when i started , so keep it going you got potential, work on your structure and add some more multies for starters