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Lucked Out(Coleon Diss...NEW)

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Lucked Out(Coleon Diss...NEW)

Postby Spyder » Sep 5th, '09, 05:49

This fat faggot got lucky so now he thinks he’s the best
One real battle you best believe me, we ain’t impressed.
This heat to your chest, this fuckin diss will smash you
Join him on a collab, all the dude did was out Class you.
Then you fuckin say he sucks… c’mon chubby you nuts
Came in a week late and don’t think you lucky enough?
“I had the hardest battle in the whole tournament, fuck”
Sellin them lyrics and the fucker isn’t earnin a buck.
What you stuck, that’s why you went away for a while
Now that you have a fake red name will you stay with a smile?
This Pyromaniac Penmanship, fuck you I’m endin-it
Cause I flip your shit while your in the process of sendin-it.
Broken game I mend-the-shit, but your styles hopeless
If you didn’t notice, bastard had only one opponent.
Now you badass… if that is what you tell yourself, alright
I guess whatever fuckin helps your ass sleep at night.
But sleep tight I want this COWard to fuckin respond
Hes duckin me-on, text, how about a bare knuckle brawl.
You aint ready for this fall, like you can get over summer
Its no wonder, he goes missin be dissed is a bummer (faggot)
Turn your back on your boy, chattin up your score
This shit is everlastin you don’t want the action of war.
This passion is more, than what you got in your heart
Ill prove there nothin there once I rip you apart.
Tell me Coleon… have you ever thought of liposuction
Ever felt embarrassed cuz your audio makes the mic-go-duckin?
This isnt how I wanted to make my return but you made me
Didn’t get on for a week because the fuckers simply lazy.
You don’t phase me, are you and Sac in the same bed…
Havin your period on your profile wont make your name red.

Outro – fuckin think you’re the shit, bitch you aint nothin
You fuckin lucked out the tournament, disses his own dude…
Your lucky you didn’t get DQ’ed motherfucker… your welcome
It just got you some real hype.
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Re: Lucked Out(Coleon Diss...NEW)

Postby J Roc » Sep 5th, '09, 06:54

He Faced Me :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :(
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Re: Lucked Out(Coleon Diss...NEW)

Postby Slim Zaddy » Sep 5th, '09, 10:26

lamfo ,, good verse ,, i can sense the anger emotion form ya verse,, so now C.R is full of disses ,, damn ,,
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Re: Lucked Out(Coleon Diss...NEW)

Postby emzee-frenzy » Sep 5th, '09, 14:02

damn spyder, you got some rock-solid shit out there :y:
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Re: Lucked Out(Coleon Diss...NEW)

Postby Spyder » Sep 5th, '09, 14:26

thanks guys :y:
$(@TTY B@Y wrote:lol ... so bitter

were u sayin i bite someone, or sayin i m bitter like mean :confusion:
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Re: Lucked Out(Coleon Diss...NEW)

Postby Spyder » Sep 5th, '09, 14:36

yes i know what bitter means, thought u mighta missed typed it and was callin me a biter lol
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Re: Lucked Out(Coleon Diss...NEW)

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 6th, '09, 13:44

Spyderrrr :worship: your the man :smoking:
i like this diss,especially cuz its about a faggot called Coleon :flower: :flower: :flower:
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Re: Lucked Out(Coleon Diss...NEW)

Postby gutawafang » Sep 6th, '09, 15:31

Fucking dope yo! Period.
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Re: Lucked Out(Coleon Diss...NEW)

Postby Spyder » Sep 6th, '09, 21:03

srry Coleon it wasnt cuz u beat me, it was because i had 3 days were i shoulda got the DQ THEN u came in and won. but i just had to release stress man, and unfortunitly u seemed to be a good target for it :sweating:
no hard feelins
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Re: Lucked Out(Coleon Diss...NEW)

Postby Spyder » Sep 7th, '09, 02:28

well alright then bring it on
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Re: Lucked Out(Coleon Diss...NEW)

Postby neversnooze » Sep 7th, '09, 03:47

top to bottom, the flow was dope. multies were good. i felt the emotion in this diss!
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Re: Lucked Out(Coleon Diss...NEW)

Postby Spyder » Sep 7th, '09, 03:48

thank you sir..........where have u been :confusion:
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