Step To My Death

[D'Leh]

Yo its fucked i know
But i had to
Listen, yo yo


Im gonna start telling you how fucked it is
Its like im living in a World so full of piss
My head is confused, im actin like a dick
I think God, is in heaven punching me with a brick
Maybe a deserve it maybe im not,
but my life its going from best to worst
not tryng to creat sorrow, no no more
i just feel to spit this, its good for both
my life and I, man I just can’t Trust
my father died, when i was driving his truck
one night he let me drive, and i lost control
i keep blaming my self, to God, and all
the Only think a thank, it’s im off drugs
so the money not came in, not just a Buck
playing mind games, people this its not fat fuck

Chorus

My sick is serius, just believe that Word, period
But if you dont i come in night just to kill you x2


Verse two, i know you feel this as much i do
My grandpa, the number of loses its now on 2
Maybe death its behind me, i just heard her , boo
Grandma, please dont die of sorrow, just not you
The next day she woke up dead,im in da school
And i hear my phone just rang, that’s not that cool
I feel My back its hiting, by the biggest bull
Im the funeral, i just passed out, this shit is true
im in the hospital now, and i felling blue
mom’s cryin, my aunt is cryin, just cuz im dying?

Chorus

My sick is serius, just believe this Word, period
But if you dont i come in night just to kill you x2

Yo, the doctor came to the room, step by step
Im a minute closer to the day of my death
but im here sitting writing this song instead
i cant eat nothin, just a fuckin piece of bread
in the end of the way i see a Light, Spike
i’ve got a girlfriend, friends, i cant deny
God give me the force, maybe i can catch up that Light



Tell me what you think gimme any tip and any crtics...this song means a lot to me tell me what you think
i still cant make any dope multie....any feedback will be returned thanks!

[BigBangBazinga]

Some parts are good, but if I were you I'd work on my english.

Keep it up!

[gutawafang]

The concept and storyline is sick. I understand the whole thing and feel it man. But your English needs lots of improvement homie. It be awesome if many parts of this shit's edited and be bettered. Keep practicing man. That was a good read.

[D'Leh]

thanks homie im tryin to make it work

[BILI]

It was pretty good(except your English..work a lil bit more on that first)but all i all cool drop..your gettin better with every drop..and I agree with Guta storyline is dope
check my new drop if you wanna viewtopic.php?f=24&t=65424

[Fa-Q]

This song is really sad man... I liked it a lot tho

[emzee-frenzy]

the story goes hard, but you need to practice more....

[D'Leh]

thanks a lot to all of you!!

[drasticlyhated]

crazy good bro but yea u need a lil work on the english but its all good it was an awsome song

[Slim Zaddy]

but leave the English aside ,, i loved it really ,, it's a sad dark verse ,, i like these types of songs ,, i can see that you have the potential to write some staff that goes to heart , i felt this , it was full of emotions ,, good shit bro ,

[Slovinec]

any production gonna be made?

[D'Leh]

thanks everybody

[Choco21]

nice song w/ lyrics ^^
keep it up is rare to do like that...
good job.... more power to you

Regards

Albert
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Pret immobilier