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Postby D'Leh » Sep 9th, '09, 01:21

The way I attack these tracks is devastating
I got a better rating after blazing beats
They call me Supaninjah with a quicka spit
Than ya boy’s trigga finga with the heat
Come to my street…rather my road
Battle these hoes…send ‘em all home
Get packin…I’m priceless with prose
Rose outta concrete…or in my case the beach
Oh you know the Ganja ree’s never outta reach
When I point the people love to stop and stare
Cause my persona is like Bruce Lee with Rasta Hair
I’m tryin to connect to the people like dirty politicians
I’m wishin…that my shark style will kill all these fishes
My mission statement states that I am something great
When it’s wartime…bong rips and I am never late
opposition irate when I commentate
Conversate converge…I am lyrically absurd
When I get in the booth and represent for the ‘burbs
As well as the hood, the block, the barrio, the slums
This is for your motha, your father, your son
And just like Ash…I will last till I feel that I’m done
I am not just another one, I am the Tokin Asian
Chiilin in the mix, but not the token Asian
Trying to dominate through digital invasion
Verbally persuading tryna blend and stop separation
I’m tired of being sick and broke
So I’m gonna stick to my shit…as I spit and smoke
Respect the flow…if not respect the throne, boy
I have emerged, surged, purged, rehabilitated and now I’m in the zone, boy
:whistle:
Let me eat your pussy while I shave you!
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Re: Random Shit

Postby D'Leh » Sep 9th, '09, 01:32

anyone?? :whistle:
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Re: Random Shit

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 9th, '09, 01:33

Good rhyming. :y:

I was going to say what the fuck are you talking about, but then I noticed the title. :tounge2:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Random Shit

Postby D'Leh » Sep 9th, '09, 01:39

haha thabks man! :y:
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Re: Random Shit

Postby Solace » Sep 9th, '09, 01:43

Keep at it dude. I've seen massive improvement from the last times I've checked your pieces. Multies could use some work and at the beginning I couldn't really find a flow but then it fixed up and I could go along with it. Keep with the vocab too, I noticed some good stuff in there when it came to what kind of words you were using :y:
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Re: Random Shit

Postby D'Leh » Sep 9th, '09, 01:47

thanks for the feed man really!!! :y:
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