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Fuck You; You Have Forsaken Me

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Fuck You; You Have Forsaken Me

Postby MC Anonymous » Sep 8th, '09, 23:16

All out diss to this bitch who has forsaken me.


I trusted you, I trusted you with all I had
you came to help me out, you even hugged me and laughed
that's all in the past, you got raped in the ass
didn't wanna tell nobody, but you gave me the pass
what the fuck you gonna do, get hit in the head with a brick-
-wall you fucking trick, sucking dick like a bitch
gonna cry like a cunt, when you here this damn track
bang back till ya crack, like you sodomized, and that's
something to ponder, just wonder why the fuck anger been slumbered
I have cumbered many days and numbers, it's no wonder
I'm so fucking tired at this bitch ass
I spit fast, to leave your ass raped with my quick thrash, it's sick trash
remininse about the bitch in other states you stupid bitch
cupid slits your heart with this, I'm spittin, rippin all your clit
tired of this, you wicked liar and bitch
fire presists to tickle ya tits with both of my lips

Fuck you.. .No need for a fucking chorus, you stupid cunt
You know WHO THE FUCK YOU ARE, I don't gotta say names

It's a motherfucking shame this shit just has to be this way
all I wanted was to talk to you, for you to see my way
spittin hate at pacifist who doesn't like to pass her fists
lift her by her skin and slash with this lashing whip, back will split
motherfucker follows God, but she's lieing to me?
why me? months ago you were crying to me
Your cousin got internal damage, and I prayed for him
now all I wish I did was fucking gave him sin
the pain within you gave me is a game to them
I'm a laughing stock to you, but now we're laughing then
what you gonna say to me, when the track is done
Angel how could you do this? ''practice son''
This an all out assault, on this bitch by the law
stitchin you all with the lyrics, spittin from jaws....
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Fuck You; You Have Forsaken Me

Postby Spyder » Sep 8th, '09, 23:21

damn son, angry Anon is back sir :y:
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Re: Fuck You; You Have Forsaken Me

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 9th, '09, 00:06

Interesting...

I can definitely see the Slim Shady influence in this. (a.k.a. KIM + THE WAY I AM + THE WARNING)
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Fuck You; You Have Forsaken Me

Postby Solace » Sep 9th, '09, 01:38

Love the personals in this, it's raw, I can't wait to hear it recorded, :y:
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Re: Fuck You; You Have Forsaken Me

Postby Wreck » Sep 9th, '09, 10:12

This is some death metal, ICP meets Eminem Kim type track shit. lol what's the purpose behind this? who's the chick?
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Re: Fuck You; You Have Forsaken Me

Postby SajN » Sep 9th, '09, 10:15

I am sorry for everything I did to you :'(
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