Run This Town

by **mcZu** » Sep 7th, '09, 19:43

I had to write something to that beat, feedback appreciated.

Run This Town:
Wordplay behind lines so in hindsight I could kill ya
My linebacker’s capable of doing you like Tila Tequila
Diptera bars equipped w/ nitro like cars, faggots
I’m so fly, when I was young, people thought I was a maggot
You bricks couldn’t spit fire if I tried to hack it
I attack it, w/ a fly fitted call it visa era
Haters are just ass, you should turn ya names in Vida Guerra
Ya’ll end up like Fawcett Farah... dead.. killed
I run this town like a professional athlete on a treadmill
Flow dope like an illegal underground meth stream
I always come hard even if I’m slept on, I define a wet dream
My rhymes are like a tag team, but greater
Morrison rappers, standing on the side lines like the Lakers
Ya’ll fakers, It's self evident ya’ll need to be canceled
I'm better than better and I stay clever back to back w/ the pencil
Ink as bone marrow, chest opposites Jack Spearow
Got heart for days, yo, like my blood equals Viagra
Haters are pussies, I’ve ‘em doubting their gender like Ciara

by **DaKidLilj** » Sep 7th, '09, 20:06

I’m so fly, when I was young, people thought I was a maggot...WTF lol... (edited) iight i get this a lil now...still honestly dumb to me but i see the whole fly n maggot reference now

some of it was nice, didnt like the last line bout Ciara since dat was all bullshit rumors bout her gender n shit...

by **mcZu** » Sep 7th, '09, 20:32

Thanks for checking. A maggot grows into a fly, hence the wordplay. And I said ''doubting your gender,'' didn't say it was true or not.

But I appreciate you checking it out. :b:

by **Emadyville** » Sep 7th, '09, 20:42

The fly metaphor was perfect cause of all the times I heard faggot and maggot rhymed, this was the best, overall i thought it was dope, and your rhyme scheme was different cause you didnt always end rhyme shit, i def enjoyed this good piece :y:

by **AOBrien09** » Sep 7th, '09, 21:06

Nice like the maggot wordplay, nice flow to it can tell it was wrote to the run this town beat, use of comparisons is good, overall a decent drop :flower:

by **mcZu** » Sep 7th, '09, 23:21

Thanks Emady and AObrien, appreciate it. :b:

by **Yah-hah** » Sep 8th, '09, 15:10

Nice little drop man pretty tight flow I like the wet dream line hahaha but yeah I hear maggot and faggot rhymed alot but at least he changed it up a bit