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In"spire"d State of Mind

Postby RealSickLindley » Sep 9th, '09, 12:15

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bm61weFrK4c


Yeahh..
Reppin' from England mate,
Checkin' the creativity,
Baby, i cradle hate,
Like it was nativity,
Loadsa immigration,
But i ask for patience,
Cos someones background,
Doesn't shape a nation,
Financial inflation,
Who you in debt to?
There's a delay dude,
Give respect where respects due..
Glad US got rid of the liar,
Cos nobody won,
So much anger from friendly fire,
When you give a boy a gun,
We're done,
Not so crazy here,
Shout the truth in my ear,
Give a youth a knife,
And other youths disappear,
Benefits only fail,
Safety? It's been a while
Benefits the Daily Mail,
Are you a paedophile?
House prices up,
2nd home instead,
Now MP's are choking,
Like they were being force fed,
This is England,
It's where i live,
Don't know where you're from man,
But now you're with..

England!
I think I’m from where dreams are made of..
There's nothing you can’t do..
Now you're in England!
These streets will make you feel brand new,
the lights will inspire you,
Let's hear it for England, England, England..

People try to front see,
What you done to this country?
Saying I can only mould,
What's infront of me,
Yeah the weathers shit,
But our teeth are fine,
Adults want to hit,
To keep school kids in line..
I just frown,
All sense can drown,
"Let me hit you with this ruler"
"But put the bat down.."
Bacon roll, Chips n Cheese, Steak and Kidney Pie,
Gregs at 3 in the mornin' after pint pitchers is my high,
It's frightening, just hope you have time for me,
Tension heightening, amongst this US and UK rivalry,
I think we're more humble, you know the truth hurts,
You have Hollywood, we have Catona adverts,
Coming home from school,
Buying fruit pastals,
Wantin' to be the new Sway's and Dizzee Rascals,
Crooked Spire, Big Ben, Meadowhall, the Lowry..
Cos if we don't rep, how are we..

England!
I think I’m from where dreams are made of..
There's nothing you can’t do..
Now you're in England!
These streets will make you feel brand new,
the lights will inspire you,
Let's hear it for England, England, England..

I'm sick, plannin' hits,
How it's meant to be,
Style like Nick Cannon Twits,
Just plain Heavenly,
But i'm not a preacher,
Or a social leach yeah,
Just reserve and observe,
So i can reach ya,
Can you even trust your kids and wife?
Maybe endanger us,
Try and dodge shit in life,
Who knew canoeing was so dangerous?
Take the trials as they come,
Cos any area in partly scum,
Shit is Monkey business,
So cheer up Mardy Bum,
Loving a patriotic memory,
The pride that they lend me,
I'm raising a cup,
Like i've won at Wembeley,
With all the strife and the hate that you bring me,
Nothing in life can't be sorted with a mate and a tinnie,
It's your kill,
Thoughts of Churchill,
We could fight on the beaches,
But sandcastles are my thrill,
Might have shit tukka, with the mouth of a trucker,
But atleast you know where i am motherfucker..

England!
I think I’m from where dreams are made of..
There's nothing you can’t do..
Now you're in England!
These streets will make you feel brand new,
the lights will inspire you,
Let's hear it for England, England, England..
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Re: In"spire"d State of Mind

Postby mcZu » Sep 11th, '09, 01:05

Nice shit, flowed dope. Love the message. Structure could be better though. Keep it up. :b:
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Re: In"spire"d State of Mind

Postby RealSickLindley » Sep 11th, '09, 11:20

mcZu wrote:Nice shit, flowed dope. Love the message. Structure could be better though. Keep it up. :b:

Thanks mate, Yeah know what you mean, tried to keep Jay Z's flow on his verses, cos he sometimes chops it up, spits faster etc.. Appreciate the feedback
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Eminem
Big l
Biggie Smalls
Royce Da 5'9"
Jigga

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