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Postby mcZu » Sep 10th, '09, 17:41

Tremendous Hip Hop share-luck based? (Naah)
I’ll leave that to a Conan Doyle case
No barbarian, sophisticated and praised
Humongous chain of thoughts in place
Ought to amaze, I won’t stop ‘till I got blisters on my feet
Aint talkin’ ‘bout the distance in a street
I don’t need no coal on my song to bring the heat (Nope)
Indeed, simple words turn into lost sound
A hard core-opt, I don’t mean tha dog pound
Lost and found amount to some reasons
So if I fall down I spring back up and I aint talkin’ seasons
Like legions I be in jury to manipulate the hammer or
Just to act plain, fly like a hero senator
Gotta end before I wake up, the buzz like Black Thought
Not quite enough just like how I thought
What? I shake haters up like Nas’ ex
Even if they sleep on me like a mattress after sex
That said, now let me clear my throat like Funk Master Flex
I got it all mastered, yes..
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Re: No Failure

Postby gutawafang » Sep 10th, '09, 17:45

HAHAHA. I keep repeating this but I shall say it again. DOPE nameplay homie. :worship:

I like all the punchlines. :y:
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Re: No Failure

Postby mcZu » Sep 10th, '09, 20:44

Thanks Guta. :b:
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Re: No Failure

Postby Spyder » Sep 10th, '09, 20:46

pretty dope dude, i liked that "even if they sleep on me like a matress after sex"
hahaah, everyones gotta feed now lol.
nice drop :y:
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Re: No Failure

Postby mcZu » Sep 10th, '09, 20:52

Thanks Spydie. :b:
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Re: No Failure

Postby classthe_king » Sep 10th, '09, 22:32

Great verse, dope wordplay.

Just to act plain, fly like a hero senator
Even if they sleep on me like a mattress after sex
Dope lines.

I don’t need no coal on my song to bring the heat (Nope)
Extra dope line :shifty:
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Re: No Failure

Postby mcZu » Sep 11th, '09, 00:52

^Hahaha, thanks Class, appreciate it. :b:
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Re: No Failure

Postby mcZu » Sep 11th, '09, 21:33

Coleon wrote:You bit Canibus but I guess it's a step up from Slaughterhouse


I never bite. And I don't see how my lines are similar to Canibus'.
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