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Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 10th, '09, 06:24

Just attack any motherfucker on this forum with at least 3 bars...
Last edited by Relapse.LP on Sep 12th, '09, 06:20, edited 1 time in total.
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Instrumental + Freestyle Section

Postby emzee-frenzy » Sep 10th, '09, 09:46

so i shine first, so all ya'll can bite my verse
as i come close to perfect, you worse than le tuna,
it aint worth it, i ejaculate punchilnes and you eat them
like a bukake at lunchtime, you can't spit them, can't spit shit
you're disc flipped, this is freestyle bitch, no lip-sync
the illest, bigger than ya'll like gorillaz, you feel this.

aight, this my beat for ya'll :

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gI7vDAhd57Y
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throat slitting bitches in public then start killing witnesses" - emzee
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Re: Instrumental + Freestyle Section

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 12th, '09, 04:22

Play the game!
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Instrumental + Freestyle Section

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 12th, '09, 05:06

yeah,emzee frenzy wanna ask it,get his ass kicked
motherfuker get blasted,thrown on a bassket
like big axe did,ur dick is a plastic,u dun have shit
some respect bitch,ur face will be masked,u muhfukn bastard


next beat :
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n3_J-mlU ... re=related
(2pac - ghetto gospel)
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Re: Instrumental + Freestyle Section

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 12th, '09, 06:19

Le Tuna gets his ass done right like Chet did his, now check it/
My gat spit fine while I'm dropping classic rhymes, now he get it/
His flow whack, my flow snacks, his lyrics whack, I'm serious, Pac/
Ghetto gospel? Ain't that produced by Slim, yeah, you think that's real rap?/
I kill fast, yeah, I dissed the guy you're riding, but which MC are you siding?/
You'd rather die as a man? Fuck that shit, don't recall the past, it/
Sounds like you're getting desperate, my letters click in your brain/


I don't feel like continuing. :tounge2: It's whack enough.

This could be an all-out, diss anyone thread instead.
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Diss Anyone On This Forum

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 12th, '09, 06:23

Now just to get this thread a move-on, I'm going to randomly diss anyone. Don't take it seriously, because my verses are gonna be whack anyways. :hooray:
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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Re: Diss Anyone On This Forum

Postby neversnooze » Sep 12th, '09, 07:54

this is fun and dont feel too bad, i suck at this too...

this diss is similiar to sir isaac newtons gravity law but it has differed
you dissing le tuna and decide to randomly attack, that was stupid
neversnooze will drop you faster then an apple, you will be frieghtened
since when was it my tr member duty to whoop his ass "da relapse"
my words are like a belt strapped to hold my wardrobe but when it unsnaps
i will hit you harder then an object dropping,you will fall down and collapse
Sometimes I stay up so late that I have my morning coffee before I go to bed
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