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not again ;\. ill stop dissin?

Postby Boston » Sep 12th, '09, 22:39

lol im not dissin scotty boy in any sort of way btw, respect 2 him.

everytime i write a verse, i like to rip heads/
off, you were mis-led, off'd and wit this pen/
watch in an instant/
i will drop a track wit a fuckin diss in every single spot in the sentence/
audio, just see me there/
toxic wit a constant flow, kill you n mop your thoughts and soul
with your greasy hair/
i dont need it here, i do it for a hobby boy/
i dont need the votes either, i got yours and scotty boys/
i wont diss j-roc, ill hit J, pot/
wit j while you suck on my ig bay cock/ (pig latin btw ha)
pick which way lost, either wit may (me), not?/
im guna get you so you can sit, pray, cross/
i got a sligt urge and it just might hurt/
get J on a track n may write you off as light work/
dont fight sir/
dissin you all day dont wana start n make ya night worst/

haa i wrote 12 bars earlier n i didnt have anythin for the last 4 so i put those together
jus bored fuckin arounddd n this kid jus pisses me off now :[ n i wana do creative writnig more aha

shout out to j roc kid!
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Re: not again ;\. ill stop dissin?

Postby J Roc » Sep 13th, '09, 02:51

Hah Whuttup Boston ... Murkage
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Re: not again ;\. ill stop dissin?

Postby Le Tunisien » Sep 13th, '09, 03:29

"Cant you just stop? you'r embarassin yourself dude"
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Re: not again ;\. ill stop dissin?

Postby Boston » Sep 13th, '09, 04:21

you quoted that from...?

and i dont think i am. butt if u say so

and wats good j! just chillennn kiddd
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Re: not again ;\. ill stop dissin?

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 13th, '09, 08:44

lol.
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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