Mi$ta Derrty Deed

[lilrossy]

Its da mista dirty deed, been in so many fights, my fists blister nd bleed,
got thirty knifes up my sleeve, im sicker than fucking ur own sister to breed,
i piss my self laughin while u grieve, nd then, i'll put u down when u achieve,
im da sickest, most illest mc, nd i'll say it again nd again, like eminem nd christopher reeves,
my rhymes a crispier then kfc's, crispy fried chicken, i friggin sure u agree,
cuz disagree, my blood will thicken, i'll cum thru ur house kickin, nd leave it sittin debris,
ima fuckin g, i twist up da weed nd smoke dat shit while im fuckin popin speed,
my bitch like I need a feed, so wit my dick hangin pass my knees, im like trick, swallow deez seeds,
as u can see, I live wit a shallow need, to please, gota problem, bitch jus leave,
u say im naïve, im free jus livin me, ur jus jealous cuz im top, like sesame seeds,
jus test me nd see, u must hav a deathwish fuckin wit me, im a twisted breed,
sittin here anxiously waiting like kids on Christmas eve, to make u fuckin bleed nd plead,
cuz im like a fuckin mouse dat steals da cheese out da fridge nd fucks da cat, u beta believe,
I take da lead, don’t give a fuck who u with, I’ll pull out dat fuckin gat, nd jus squeeze,
Im dat bully at cha skewl, givin wedgies, nd im coming for u, ima deadly contagious disease,
Ima leave ya’ll til last like vegies, ya’ll sum dead g’s, take ya’s all out at once, like we did da Japanese.

[gutawafang]

The structure's bad.

But I think it does flow quite well man. The concept is good. The lines were on point. Most are just rhymes, not that many multis.

6.5.

[Slim Zaddy]

i think it's good man, flowed well to me ,,,,,,, nice content ,,, i liked it ,, keep it comming

[lilrossy]

@ gutawafang - Can plz tell me how the structure was bad. not disagreeing, ur entitled to ur own opinion, jus wanna know why. also there's planty of multies in there. btw thnx for readin.

@ Slim Zaddy - thanx alot man, i appreciate it.

[gutawafang]

@ gutawafang - Can plz tell me how the structure was bad. not disagreeing, ur entitled to ur own opinion, jus wanna know why. also there's planty of multies in there. btw thnx for readin.

The amount of multis died down as the lyrics progress. And the structure is okay but could be better.

[Solace]

Damn@you still continuing to make multies after you rhymed it about 70,000 times already haha. Shit was good. Ending was pretty funny. You got skills with multies, keep it up

[lilrossy]

Damn@you still continuing to make multies after you rhymed it about 70,000 times already haha. Shit was good. Ending was pretty funny. You got skills with multies, keep it up

thanx alot man, glad u like it. appreciate the feedbak.

[gutawafang]

Ima leave ya’ll til last like vegies, ya’ll sum dead g’s, take ya’s all out at once, like we did da Japanese.

That line is fucking dope I must say.

[lilrossy]

Ima leave ya’ll til last like vegies, ya’ll sum dead g’s, take ya’s all out at once, like we did da Japanese.

That line is fucking dope I must say.

thanks man.