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Re: just some punchlines i wrote

Postby gutawafang » Sep 16th, '09, 16:01

I liked the whole thing. Read it twice.

I find this the best man:

Abortion's only a divisive issue
'Cause I cut a fetus in half & slice through tissue
I've been a psycho since the day of my birth
And when they pulled me from out of my mother's girth
There were horns on my head and I started to curse
Took the umbilical cord and strangled the nurse

Dope references. :y:
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Re: just some punchlines i wrote

Postby lilrossy » Sep 17th, '09, 05:45

:worship: fuckin awesome man, good read :worship:
"Too fatal, unable to crash
Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
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Re: just some punchlines i wrote

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 17th, '09, 06:55

Nice, but don't say that you killed 2Pac. That's just twisted, lol...
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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