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Postby eminemgirl1234 » Sep 17th, '09, 16:06

If when you wake up in the morning,
And the hurting is so great,
You don't want to get out of bed,
And face a world of hate.

If everything in life goes wrong,
And nothing you do seems right ,
You just try a little harder
And soon you'll see the light.

For every person who has put you down
And filled your life with pain,
You must strive to achieve greatness
And show them you can win.

For every disappointment,
For the times you are let down,
There will be a better moment
And your life will turn around.

Because everyone feels heartache
And everyone feels pain,
But only those who have
true courage
Can get up and try again.
"Sometimes I feel so alone,
I just don't know, feels like I been down this road before.
So lonely and cold, it's like something takes over me,
soon as I go home and close the door.
Kinda feels like Déjà Vu, I wanna get away from this place I do,
but I can't and I wont say I tried but I know that's a lie cuz I don't,
and why I just don't know...

Malina a.k.a Mickey

"Ignorance is your new best friend!"-Paramore
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Re: Again

Postby DƎRDYPK » Sep 17th, '09, 16:09

:worship: beautiful
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Re: Again

Postby Drama Setter » Sep 17th, '09, 16:38

Props :worship: it's very lovely :sweating: :y:
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props to Coleon and DarkBlade
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Re: Again

Postby Slim Zaddy » Sep 17th, '09, 16:40

damn man ,, i can relate to it , it's very nice ,, really ,,,,,,, full of emotions and hope ,, great piece keep it up , and write more like this . :y:
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z_em = Slim Zaddy = Zaid AQ which is my real name
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Re: Again

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 17th, '09, 18:41

I love how it's so poetic and simple in the midst of all these multis and beef ya know. It's nice to kinda take a break between all this and read something simple yet fly at the same time. I love it ma
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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