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Eye Candy

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Eye Candy

Postby eminemgirl1234 » Sep 17th, '09, 15:58

There is:
Book in hand, hair in face tousled perfectly
Reading a controversial book on philosophy
Fourth-period eye candy
I just stare
Concentrating on counting freckles
rather than fractions

Sitting next to me
He reads contentedly
Eyes focused
He doesn't even blink as 2 jocks
Play football with a dusty eraser
Now the globe gets knocked over
And they switch to soccer

Soon pencials are rolling all over the floor from
The globe's "goal" between the desks
Everyone loves the chaos instead
of the class

All the while he keeps reading
I dream my skin is the exact page he's reading
His eyes trace every curve and feature,
never missing a word

Just as I finsh picturing
His big blue eyes
Rereading every inch of me,
The bell rings
He quietly places his bookmark between
2 undersving pages

He leaves without a small glance
Left with only daydreams I move on

There he is:
Brush in hand
Headphones half on
Painting a masterpiece
Fifth-period eye candy
"Sometimes I feel so alone,
I just don't know, feels like I been down this road before.
So lonely and cold, it's like something takes over me,
soon as I go home and close the door.
Kinda feels like Déjà Vu, I wanna get away from this place I do,
but I can't and I wont say I tried but I know that's a lie cuz I don't,
and why I just don't know...

Malina a.k.a Mickey

"Ignorance is your new best friend!"-Paramore
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Re: Eye Candy

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 17th, '09, 18:45

Wow mama I love it. I'm a poet too I just kinda put it into rap form for the sire. But yo you have a beautiful way of using the simplet amount of words to create these images. I love it keep doin ya thing :8)
Image

"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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