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Reason to Breathe

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Reason to Breathe

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 8th, '09, 14:50

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The keeper of my dreams these dreams so vivid,
Paralyzing my senses with your sweet candy kisses
I close my eyes just to see your face,
I may not live forever but I'll breathe in case

I speak such words softly so you don't misunderstand,
That I count every second till I can kiss her again,
Till I'm considered a friend, a man, or even your lover,
So I'm lost in your clouds concealed by your thunder,
Revealed as we wonder across the surface of the stars,
Swirvin in our cars as we circle back to mars,
The inner workings of heart are lost within the pages,
Drawn in the spaces while I cover her body with all the constelations,
These stars run so far so please won't you come back to me,
Take us to make love in zero gravity,
Even the moon has your name memorized,
Hypnotized by your hips and thighs with the quickest try,
So I'm just gettin by when I lifted my gifted eyes,
I'm lifted by the swifted lie so I just slip inside,
Even the dull tomb knows it will be full soon,
Your composed by the full moon the only rose in full bloom,


The full gloom when the tulip kissed the daisy,
All the flowers said we're crazy but we don't listen to em lately,
You run to my arms for saftey, don't cry please my baby,
This angel is amazing with her feathered wings to save me,
Rubbing my back while you softly sing,
Cause my shoulder blades ache for the want of wings,
For the want of dreams where you fill my vision,
Until the sun is missin and the moon is up and risen,
Until the vinrant leaves all fall and turn brittle,
Back again when the sun stops to sizzle and the moon drops a little,
I can't stop this riddle it runs with the same flow,
The same hope that I'll forever sit on this rainbow,
And never get on this main road I continue on the backstreets,
Run forever like track meets run and they'll never catch me,

Like the crow chasing the butterfly,
Can't think of another time when she was with another guy,
Another lie of another guy who only loves her for her colored eyes,
She shut her blinds wile in the gutter lies the other lies,
The colored skies covered with one crow though he's colorblind,
The butterfly's so beautiful so he can't help but wonder why,
He was the one chosen cost him all these thoughts broken,
She brought him hope and defrosted what was frozen,
His heart is open like the sky on a cloudless day,
Like a beautiful child to make him cry in the proudest way,
The loudest say he pried open the shell so reckless,
Traveled to the depths of hell just to find her necklace,
Her angel wings survived the weapon yet he died in seconds,

Hahaha a love note with multi's wat am I doin with my life :P
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Reason to Breathe

Postby mcZu » Sep 8th, '09, 20:22

That's dope, nice job. Flow seems on spot; vocab is good, rhyme scheme is dope and the imagery/way of expressing your self is dope as well. Overall a good and solid drop bruh. Keep it up.
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Re: Reason to Breathe

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 10th, '09, 14:27

hey thanks for the feed yall appreciate it
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Reason to Breathe

Postby Fa-Q » Sep 10th, '09, 20:22

Hey Jus who was this written for??
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Re: Reason to Breathe

Postby Drama Setter » Sep 10th, '09, 20:57

oh it's Fucking awesome , thx man , pretty pro :y:
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Re: Reason to Breathe

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 10th, '09, 21:11

Fa-Q wrote:Hey Jus who was this written for??


Tawna
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Reason to Breathe

Postby Fa-Q » Sep 10th, '09, 21:14

Yah-hah wrote:
Fa-Q wrote:Hey Jus who was this written for??


Tawna

oh oh just wonderin
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Re: Reason to Breathe

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 11th, '09, 04:40

Who you think it would have been for?
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Reason to Breathe

Postby Fa-Q » Sep 11th, '09, 04:45

Yah-hah wrote:Who you think it would have been for?

Idk maybe it was a lil older like maybe Nina...but I know you love tawna more than you liked nina
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Re: Reason to Breathe

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 11th, '09, 04:47

yeah never really loved her just kinda you know the whole big breasted brazilian girl thing. Tawna is crazy beautiful though. like stuff like this is easy to come up with when I think of her
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Reason to Breathe

Postby Fa-Q » Sep 11th, '09, 05:14

Yah-hah wrote:yeah never really loved her just kinda you know the whole big breasted brazilian girl thing. Tawna is crazy beautiful though. like stuff like this is easy to come up with when I think of her

lol big breasted...for some reason i always think of Huijing whenever i hear big breasted...i can see him smiling a big toothy smile saying "big breasted"
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Re: Reason to Breathe

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 11th, '09, 14:00

Hahahahaha but with his wierd sexual straight face hahahahahaha
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Reason to Breathe

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 18th, '09, 17:05

Yeah man I'm gonna put this one in the book as one of the first poems in there
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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