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Experiment (My New Rhyme Scheme Style)

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Experiment (My New Rhyme Scheme Style)

Postby MC Anonymous » Sep 19th, '09, 16:56

Spit intense, rip in sense, grip ya eyes and spit in them
slit the eyes, the victims end depends on penmenship men
cataclysmic, battle mystic, fire, nitro, comes from psycho
guns are wild, cattle split with, beef machetes from my isles
of war machines, you're boring me, pick you up with gravity
hit this slut so badly see, black and blue with agony
rappin truth, so battle me, fantasies is you beating me
capture me, just feeding these intestines decievingly
mitochondria energy sight goes on to my enemies
digest them with clarity, clartin pairs within, then you see
bodies in my stomache, dumb shits, defecate the substance
replicate the rough spit then regurgitate and chuck it
buckets upon buckets, put it ovens, cooked and poked then
books are open, shooken, recited, enticed when book is spoken
Abercrombie zombies on these bodies, got me, stop these
sloppy skinless bodies from chomping on top of my cock please!
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Experiment (My New Rhyme Scheme Style)

Postby Tranquil » Sep 19th, '09, 17:13

its good man, you should check out mine: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=67909
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Re: Experiment (My New Rhyme Scheme Style)

Postby classthe_king » Sep 19th, '09, 18:53

Eminemislegend wrote:its good man, you should check out mine: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=67909


^^^This is so annoying, dont just put oh thats good then ask for feed. If you want feed then give real feed.


I liked this alot more then your old style, all the words flow together perfectly, im sure this would sound amazing on audio.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Experiment (My New Rhyme Scheme Style)

Postby Solace » Sep 20th, '09, 03:05

Shit was dope bro! :y: I'd like to hear some of this shit in audio haha.
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