Here I Come!

[shadyallday]

verse 1
everybody's like i remind them of michael myers/ why? cause i wouldn't think twice to slice ur tires/ break into ur house and attack u with a butcher knife and pliers/ i would start a fire, but the fire would ignite a riot/ then i would have to explain to the firefighters, but they wouldn't buy it, especially when my cars blocking the fire hydrant/ i try to drive away, but i start a nine car pile up/ i would stop ur bleedin chin, but it would just bleed again/ i'm so disobedient/ i need a friend, i'm a demon seed, playin with hypodermic needles and pins/

(chorus)
Here i come?, u better run for ur life/ here i come!, u better find something to duck under and hide/ here i come!, u better grab a gun or a knife/ here i come!, u better run, cause i'm comin tonight!/

verse2
sometimes i wonder fam, could i have been the son of sam?/ probably not, i'd go to shoot and my gun would jam/ and it would suck, cause i couldn't have called a mulligan/ i'ma act like Jack the Ripper/ i'ma backslap ur sister/ if i attack this kid, u'd overreact, and i would have to act fast, and slash ur wrists up/ u would have to be a slasher film buff/ to really know which way i would have to kill her/ maybe i could re-create Freddy and Jason/ u think i'ma malevolent rapist/ i would bring the machette, but its too heavy to wave it/i can't be held accountable for all the dead bodies u find on the pavement and all the dead bodies u found in my basement!/

(chorus#2)
Here i come!, u better go find u a hiding spot/ here i come!, if u don't run, u'll be dying by nine o'clock/ here i come!, this is ur final stop/ here i come!, say one more word, and u'll end up in a pine box!/

verse3
i guess i'm sorta like Norman Bates/ but i'd probably get off on a manslaughter case/ i don't think that much force, made the camcorder break/ i was bombed out of my gourd okay/ i'ma flee the scene in a white ford like O.J./ i don't think the glove will fit/ then u must acquit/ man u know i ain't do nothin kid/ u always blame me when u find something big/ i'll let him go, if he just submit, i have no reason for doing it, just for kicks/ he shoulda never let me in/ now theres a bloody mess, and i get arrested again, go in for questioning, and get sentenced to 10/ years but i have no regrets for what i did/ i'm like Dennis the Menace, in need of medicine, i'ma go relax i just got a seditive/

[gutawafang]

Structure's not improving. Hard to read. Hard to flow. But at least I see multis.

[lilrossy]

fuk wat gutawafang says man, thought this shit alright hey. it flowed pretty well to me. i passed school, so it wasn't hard to read. not to bad, keep practicing and keep writing man.

[gutawafang]

fuk wat gutawafang says man, thought this shit alright hey. it flowed pretty well to me. i passed school, so it wasn't hard to read. not to bad, keep practicing and keep writing man.

Chill.

[Solace]

You're definitely dope, just fix your structure and everyone that posts here will see that you shouldn't be slept on.