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Re: Obsessed (Poem)

Postby Yah-hah » Sep 8th, '09, 15:15

Kinda nice to through in some poem stuff in there everyonece in awhile. I dig it man keep it up
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

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Re: Obsessed (Poem)

Postby gutawafang » Sep 8th, '09, 15:57

Yah-hah wrote:Kinda nice to through in some poem stuff in there everyonece in awhile. I dig it man keep it up

Thanks for checking it out bro. :)
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Re: Obsessed (Poem)

Postby eminemgirl1234 » Sep 18th, '09, 15:43

Is it for me? lol, just kidding! why you so obsessed with me, boy I wanna know. liying that you sexing me when everybody knows! lol! love you lots! kisses. :p :p :p
"Sometimes I feel so alone,
I just don't know, feels like I been down this road before.
So lonely and cold, it's like something takes over me,
soon as I go home and close the door.
Kinda feels like Déjà Vu, I wanna get away from this place I do,
but I can't and I wont say I tried but I know that's a lie cuz I don't,
and why I just don't know...

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Re: Obsessed (Poem)

Postby Solace » Sep 19th, '09, 15:13

Great poem :y:
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Re: Obsessed (Poem)

Postby gutawafang » Sep 20th, '09, 03:38

eminemgirl1234 wrote:Is it for me? lol, just kidding! why you so obsessed with me, boy I wanna know. liying that you sexing me when everybody knows! lol! love you lots! kisses. :p :p :p

Love you too. :)

Solace wrote:Great poem :y:

Thank you. :y:
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