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Psycho Of A Mind (Intro To My New Style)

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Psycho Of A Mind (Intro To My New Style)

Postby MC Anonymous » Sep 20th, '09, 16:28

All the punctuation and such is needed for me to keep a flow, and for you to know what I'm doing. Enjoy!


Darkness sparks then, clack the magnum offence
cough ten bullets, pull it, back the carcass-
-Far then, crack a latch to the back-
-of his spine, attack more times then rhymes; smack-
-vertabreas faster, words I say scatters-
-matter, bones splatters, verse I spray traps there-
-first then pray after, blood pours; drunk more,
lips swole, sniff coke, numb from the skunks; doors-
-open and close, broken my nose
I scream, this a dream? blood soaken my clothes
dismemberment, ends the membership-
-of spine to the mind, now remember it
I'm beast, peace of mind like piece to head
reaping blind, heat there spines, sleeping dead
It's Anonymous anthem, sanctum of random-
-phantoms ready to haunt my lyrics and hang them

psycho of a mind, then
hit you with a rhyme, spin
blood from the iron
show you why you're dieing

Morbid torment, sliced and diced faster
bastard pores bent, iced out, and my laughter-
-shatters wack rappers, swords then come after
scorn then with scattered bullets to fat for
grusome black gats, whore; you on my nerves
crew will get burned, and you will then turn-
-to ashes; gashes, slashes, lashes;
matches; evil fire snatches-
-all you bitches, switched with my sentence
end this, twitchin wrist then will lead split-
-papers, savor the flavor of lyrics
cryptic, articulate flames for my spirits
Monstrosity, pop bodies cause I see
tiny pseudo prodigies thinkin' they as hot as me
and what you got to see, I am quite possibly
nice with the mic, call me a fucking odyssey.

psycho of a mind, then
hit you with a rhyme, spin
blood from the iron
show you why you're dieing
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Psycho Of A Mind (Intro To My New Style)

Postby DƎRDYPK » Sep 20th, '09, 16:31

you already know what I think of your new style :worship: :y: loved that piece
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Re: Psycho Of A Mind (Intro To My New Style)

Postby Requiem » Sep 20th, '09, 17:14

really nice man, its good to see u drop every now and then. which is something i should do :confusion:
i like the flow of it, different from ur normal, but very clean and not too complex. :smoking:
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Re: Psycho Of A Mind (Intro To My New Style)

Postby Arabian Shady » Sep 20th, '09, 17:37

Requiem wrote:really nice man, its good to see u drop every now and then. which is something i should do :confusion:
i like the flow of it, different from ur normal, but very clean and not too complex. :smoking:


ye homie, thats exactly what i think
well written with ample traces of classsic Anon :y:
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50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: Psycho Of A Mind (Intro To My New Style)

Postby Solace » Sep 20th, '09, 18:08

Requiem wrote:really nice man, its good to see u drop every now and then. which is something i should do :confusion:
i like the flow of it, different from ur normal, but very clean and not too complex. :smoking:

Every now and then? MC Anonymous drops like everyday man.

Great piece, I loved it and I can't add much more to that. Is this by any chance going to be recorded?
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Re: Psycho Of A Mind (Intro To My New Style)

Postby Relapse.LP » Sep 20th, '09, 18:41

Awesome multies. :y:

Is it just me or do some of the rhymes make no sense at all? :confusion: Or is this typical??
Yo, from the first to the last of it; delivery is passionate/
The whole and not the half of it; vocab and not the math of it/
Projectile that them blasted with; accurate assassin shit/
Me and Kweli close like... Bethlehem and Nazareth/


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