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Poverty With Me

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Poverty With Me

Postby MC Anonymous » Sep 19th, '09, 15:53

Aiiyo..

life of poverty bothers me, living inside a monstrosity
look at what I've gotten me, death from all this bodily
harm I inflict, to my own body welfare
but who the hell cares, I put my self there
morphine, oxycodon, codons
sell DNA to sperm banks to get my phone on
I can't escape, fate erased my space
in this universe and replaced it with another face
How the fuck can I afford to pay attention in class
when I can't afford to eat, man the tention will last
struggle of a lifestyle, living as a hype child
giving you a right smile, fuck I want to die wild
when I see some money, that sweet little green
a forest fire, flames and erases my dreams
get a percocet, sell it to a turkish gent, get percent
spend the cents, go to sleep poor again

A poor existance, living to get rich
shot from a gangster, dead in a wet ditch
robbed for ya drugs ya bod caught a slug
a never ending cycle when you gotta be a thug

could barely afford like a ford with no doors
empty pockets with a broken watch from force
of a death blow horse, the chariot sweepin
when it comes to me, why am I scared of it weepin?
guilded age of today, to the old and gray
fore closers on thier homes being sold away
there's death and destruction, nothing left
When I didn't even fuckin' do something yet
should I take the tech and break somebodies neck
to get fake respect, and then make my checks?
ir's a paradox in a pair of socks and my shoes
and You'll never understand, what can never be used
I'm tired of this life, and I'll never be free
is that why in my blood I keep the letters with me
that spell out my demise, ''Poverty With Me''?
Well let's see.. guess I'll never be able to be

A poor existance, living to get rich
shot from a gangster, dead in a wet ditch
robbed for ya drugs ya bod caught a slug
a never ending cycle when you gotta be a thug
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Poverty With Me

Postby DƎRDYPK » Sep 19th, '09, 17:07

:worship: you drop some of the dopest rhymes ever bro :y:
that was fresh!
just got done rapping it in my head & that got hella nice flow
If i could pick out a favorite part it would be the last 4 bars on the 1 verse
MC Anonymous wrote:How the fuck can I afford to pay attention in class
when I can't afford to eat, man the tention will last
struggle of a lifestyle, living as a hype child
giving you a right smile, fuck I want to die wild
when I see some money, that sweet little green
a forest fire, flames and erases my dreams
get a percocet, sell it to a turkish gent, get percent
spend the cents, go to sleep poor again



keep up the work man i like this piece :y: :b:
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Re: Poverty With Me

Postby Solace » Sep 20th, '09, 03:19

Great piece MC. I think I like verse 1 more than verse 2. And chorus was nice too, but I can't say I really liked it that much. But the verses were amazing imo, keep it real man. :y:
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Re: Poverty With Me

Postby Xray » Sep 22nd, '09, 01:54

Love it man, the hook is dope. Liking your new drops man, anonymous all matured and shit ahahahaha crazy. I can relate to it a lot so that's an instant = dope. :y:
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Re: Poverty With Me

Postby lilrossy » Sep 22nd, '09, 02:04

nice shit man. I agree that chorus is on fire. sick drop, keep it up man. :y:
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After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
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Re: Poverty With Me

Postby gutawafang » Sep 22nd, '09, 04:41

Read this twice. It's Anon-style. :worship:
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